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the other side of the coin 例如: the other side of the coin of eating fast food is ill health. (吃快餐的坏处是影响健康) 又或者说: On the other side of the coin, we should bear in mind the fact that fast food fits urban lifestyle.(在另外一方面,我们需要记住这么一个事实:快餐适合城市生活.) Analysis of Writing Assignments Ⅰ Karen Chan English Language and Culture Department 2012/10/09 Write a short composition (about 200 words) on the topic for homework. Is it a good method of education to pay children for doing household jobs in their homes? Requirements You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. 思想与表达 ideas and arguments （7分） 1. 思想内容 ① 内容切题 仔细审题：Is it a good method of education to pay children for doing household jobs in their homes? 确定作文类型：议论文（argument）、记叙文（narrative）、说明文（exposition） 思想与表达 ideas and arguments （7分） ② 内容充实 有足够的论据支持论点 运用恰当的论证方法，如 因果论证：because, due to, owing to, thanks to, therefore, as a result, as a consequence... 举例论证：for example, for instance, take sth as an example… 对比论证：conversely, in contrast, to the contrary... 让步论证：although, though… 思想与表达 ideas and arguments （7分） ③ 观点明确/论点鲜明 在第一部分明确提出观点/立场 As far as I am concerned, it is a good method of education… In my perspective, it is not a resonable method of education… I hold the view that this method has both pros and cons… 思想与表达 ideas and arguments （7分） ④ 论据支持论点 论据不能与论点矛盾 I think that paying children for doing housework is not reasonable because it can help children learn how to budget. ⑤ 有独到见解 加分点 思想与表达 ideas and arguments （7分） 2. 表达效果 ① 表达清晰流畅 把观点说清楚，避免笼统宽泛 The nature of the housework changed completely. 思想与表达 ideas and arguments （7分） ② 有说服力 运用恰当的论证方法 逻辑性 因果论证：因果关系要鲜明 举例论证：例子要贴切 对比论证：对比要强烈 让步论证：前轻后重 思想与表达 ideas and arguments （7分） 3. 篇章组织结构 ① 每段有主题句 第一部分：引入话题，点明观点 第二部分：先说原因，再论证 第三部分：先概括前面所说，再总结或反过来 思想与表达 ideas a