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一些资料： 值得看的帖子： HYPERLINK :8080/bbs/showthread.php?s=threadid=121118 :8080/bbs/showthread.php?s=threadid=121118 ETS官方Issue主题范文36篇 HYPERLINK /grewriting/05.htm /grewriting/05.htm ETS官方Argument主题范文36篇 HYPERLINK /grewriting/06.htm /grewriting/06.htm ETS最新issue论题库、经典范文 HYPERLINK /grewriting/07.htm /grewriting/07.htm ETS最新Argument论题库、经典范文 HYPERLINK /grewriting/08.htm /grewriting/08.htm ISSUE官方范文之网友点评 2003-6-23 11:29:52 HYPERLINK /bbs/forumdisplay.php?forumid=17 \t _blank 寄托天下? 作者:happyman2000? (本文属 HYPERLINK / \t _blank 寄托天下网友原创，转载请务必注明出处和作者。) 我今天细看了两遍较难的6分范文，点评这篇如下，欢迎各位排砖！? It?is?unfortunate?that?todays?educators?place?so?much?emphasis?on?finding? out?what?students?want?to?include?in?the?curriculum?and?then?giving?it?to? them.?It?is?the?educators?duty?to?determine?the?curriculum?and?the? students?duty?to?study?what?is?presented?to?them.? 题目的意思是，当今教育部门过于重视学生在课程设置中的决定作用，正确的做法是教育部 门决定课程，学生的任务就是好好学习。? The?statement?above?conceals?intesting?connotations?far?above?curriculum? development.?Issues?of?classroom?control?and?development?of?scholarly? talents?are?at?stake,?not?simply?a?debate?over?which?books?are?acceptable? or?over?revisionist?histories.开题表明课程设置是次要的，重要的是适当的课堂秩序 以及培养学生的学术才能。这是一个典型的另起炉灶型的作文，提出issue题目中并不包含的 观点。? The?statement?itself?is?a?bit?misleading?in?that?in?my?experience,?student? control?over?curriculum?hardly?existed.?Each?year,?there?were?certain? course?offerings?made?available,?and?students?were?to?choose?from?those? offerings,?of?course?bearing?in?mind?requirements?for?graduation?set?forth? by?the?administration.?On?a?classroom?level,?the?immediate,?initial? material?may?have?been?somewhat?directed?by?the?students,?but?this?was?a? part?of?the?process?allowed?by?the?teacher/professor?in?order?to?gain?the? interest?and?attention?of?the?students.（以上是对issue题目中“学生对课程设置具 有决定作用”presumption的否定,指出这不符合事实。）However,?too?much?of?any? one?thing?becomes?problematic;?（这句话是否是指“过犹不及”的意思？我不大确定。 However用于转折，但从下文的意思看，好像并不是对however以前内容的转折呀！这里可