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CET-4 作文应考讲座：目标与策略 编写： 唐伟胜（SMU外语培训中心） CET-4 写作要求 《大纲》：初步的写和说的能力 30分钟内写一篇不少于120单词的文章，主要考察学生运用英语进行书面表达的能力，对内容有严格要求，由汉语提纲、图表、关键词等形式加以限定。 总体评分制：1）切题与否；2）表达是否清楚；3）语言错误与连贯；4）用词幅度与句式变化 具体标准： 13-15分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。（几乎全对） 10-12分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。（对中有错） 7-9分： 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。（对错相当） 4-6分：基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重的语言错误。（错中有对） 1-3分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。（几乎全错） CET-4 写作攻略 （1）---写作注意事项 卷面整洁：字迹清楚，少连笔、草书、涂画、标点。 切题：审题（提纲要求，写作内容与要求相关） 语法：尽量正确 表达清楚：句子完整，不求惊人之语，只求句子间逻辑顺序清晰 层次清楚，句子发挥应有作用，共同说明需要说明的道理 合理定位：7-9分只需切题和大致正确；10-12分需要少犯语法错误和一定丰富的句式变化；13-15需要写出英语的感觉 CET-4写作攻略 （2）---样文分析 Friendship is more and more important in our daily life as the sun shines the flowers .Once, that we have many friends who can be good listeners when we feel happy, we must enjoy our lives more. On secend thoughts, if we hadnt have friend with other people, we would feel alone and we would become unheathly. However, if that ,someone would consider we as crazy men or something wrong with our heads. In morden time, there are many factors to keep friends, for example, loyalty, honesty, tolerance, communication. But in my opinion, communication is the most important thing. At first, we make friends by communication. If we didnt know anything about other, we cant make friends with other. Second, anyhow we argue with each other sometimes. To solve this problem, the only thing is communication. Having friends can take smiling and happy to us. Sharing one happiness can become two. So why not making more and more friends? （147 words） Grade： 3 In the morden time, people also need honesty. Honesty, which likes a brige crossing the river contact each bank,show our ture hearts. The existing of honesty , when we interview or communication with other people, can make better pression to each other. The honesty isnt out of date. The old men need, we fashion men need too. There is an example to illustrate: when we take part in the WTO, the present of Chia zhu tol