漫画写作指导.ppt

Reading makes a full man, conference a ready man, and writing an exact man. — Francis Bacon 读书使人渊博，交谈使人机敏，写作使人严谨。 —弗朗西斯·培根 Difficulties in writing based on cartoons 如何看懂图片，弄清主旨 怎样抓住信息，布局谋篇 怎样让语句流畅，结构紧凑 Cooperation needs effective communication, without which we’ll do things blindly. 观察漫画，明晰主旨； Example: Figure out the themes of the following cartoons as quickly as possible. Talent does not necessarily guarantee success. Only by making enough efforts can we realize our dreams. It is our attitude that matters most in our life. Three parts: 抓住信息，布局谋篇； analyze the cartoon (facts/reasons/ results…) give your opinions/ comments/ suggestions/solutions describe the cartoon Part 1: Describe the cartoon ★ The picture vividly describes an interesting/a common phenomenon. ★ From the picture, we can see that there are…/…is (are) doing… ★As is vividly shown in the cartoon, … ★ As can be seen/we can see in the cartoon, … 描述图中北极熊(polar bear)的现状 As we can see in the picture, a polar bear is sitting on a piece of melting ice with an umbrella to protect himself from the sunlight. Surrounded by water and seeing that his home on an ice field is disappearing, he looks so sad and helpless. Not only the bear but also all the other animals and human beings are suffering from global warming, which is worsening day by day. 点评：Excellent! 描写精简, 恰到好处，选词精准，正确使用了较复杂的语法结构，有效使用了语句间的连接成分。 恰当使用关联词；使用较高级词汇和较复杂的语法结构 Tips for polishing up your writing 1. To use linking words if necessary; 2. To use advanced vocabulary and complicated structures if possible. Linking words: 逻辑角度 合适的过渡性词汇 表示时间顺序 表示平行并列 表示递进 表示转折对比 表示因果 表示归纳总结 表示时间顺序 ◆first /firstly, second/ secondly, third/thirdly, finally ◆ in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly ◆ to begin/start with, then/next, last but not least 表示平行并列 ◆ both…and…; not