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The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station. “Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station’s coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.” 例文： A critique of the memorandum The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station. It is about the time management of national news and weather and local news the late-night news program devotes to over the past year. From the memorandum, it is easy to know the time management of news program should be changed, but this argument still has leaks and assumptions. Look through the passage, the manager tells us that the news program changed their time management last year and received complaint from viewers about station’s coverage of weather and local news. However, people can’t know what the viewers complain about. People also don’t know the relationship between late-night news program’s time management and station’s coverage of weather and local news from what the manager said. Actually, there is no relationship between them. The passage should tell people clearly what the viewers complain about is the time of weather and local news or range of the news program has covered. Therefore, the passage must give more detail, otherwise, people can’t know what is talking about or even be persuaded. Additionally, the memorandum said that local news and local businesses used to advertise during our late-night news program had canceled the cooperation with the