2017-2018学年高一英语（浙江）人教版必修1课件：Unit2 English around the world 2.4.pptVIP

针对训练 写作指导 写作模板 1.归纳主题。本文记叙了作者帮助在路上遇到的一个无家可归的人的过程以及自己的感悟。送人玫瑰,手留余香。作者体验到了帮助人的快乐,并提醒自己珍惜现在的美好生活。 2.认真体会画线词的含义。画线词是对续写语境的提示或者限制。选择可用的词汇,帮助构思要续写的内容。 3.所续写的内容是文章的一部分,注意其延续性和一致性。在本文中,续写的第一段内容要突出作者对这位无家可归的人进行的二次帮助;第二段内容要突出自己对助人为乐的感悟。通过把自己的生活和这位无家可归的人进行比较,作者提醒自己要珍惜现在的生活。 针对训练 写作指导 写作模板 4.在确保主题不变的情况下,适当增添内容,以使行文连贯。这篇文章的续写,要以时间和故事发展的过程为线索,描写作者的心情和感悟。 5.注意段落结构的完整和句子语法结构的丰富性和正确性。把所提示的单词和短语有机结合起来。可以使用复合句和并列句。例如:I asked him if I could buy him a few meals and put it on a gift card for him.和I’ve never felt such a feeling to help someone as I did today. 针对训练 写作指导 写作模板 I drove off with such heaviness in my heart that I felt I had to go back to help him. When I came back 1.　　　　　　 　　　　(史蒂夫已经吃完饭了).I asked him 2.　　　　　　　　　　(我是否能帮助他).He told me 3.　　　　　　　　　　(真的不用).He would never 4.　　　　　　　　　　(要钱).I asked him if I could 5. 　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　(为他买几顿饭然后放在代金卡里).He told me 6.　　　　　　　　　　(那就太好心了).I drove to McDonalds and 7. 　　 　　　　　　　　(为他买了几顿饭)and gave him a gift card.? Steve had finished his meal if I could help him not really beg for money buy him a few meals and put it on a gift card for him that would be so kind bought him some meals 针对训练 写作指导 写作模板 When I left him,I knew I had done what God wanted me to do!I’ve never felt 8.　　　　 　　　　　　(帮助人是如此得快乐) as I did today.I was reminded again of 9.　　　　　　 　　　　(我过着多么幸福得生活啊)! I 10.　　　　　　　　　　(有温暖的家).I have money to buy a hot meal,and I 11. 　　　　　　　　 　　(有家人和朋友)! Sometimes God sends something or someone to 12.　　　　　　　 　　　(提醒我们知道我们是多么得幸福)!? so happy to help someone what a happy life I have have a warm home have a family and friends remind us of how happy we are 针对训练 写作指导 写作模板 参考范文: I drove off with such heaviness in my heart that I felt I had to go back to help him.When I came back Steve had finished his meal.I asked him if I could help him.He told me not really.He would never beg for money.I asked him if I could buy him a few meals and put it on a gift card for him.He told me