1科技论文英文摘要1.ppt

医学论文的英语表达及英文摘要的写作 南方医科大学学报编辑部 王征爱 垂钓 忙里偷闲应郊游①，临置渔具钓花都②。 人在池旁心系刊，一叠文稿不离手③。 【注释】① 郊游非本意，盛情难却，应邀出游。② 不是钓鱼人，不备钓鱼竿，既然应邀去了，只好临时购买钓鱼工具；花都，地名，广州市郊。③ 邀请推不掉，付印又在即，只好带着稿件去。虽在鱼塘边，却是钓竿插地，稿件在手，愿者上钩吧。出于职业习惯，常常是在办公室外看稿效率反倒更高。 花都台湾花果园 提纲 1.摘要的类型 2.英文摘要与中文摘要的区别 3.摘要常用词和句型 4.摘要的语态和人称 5.摘要的时态 6.摘要常用表达和几个/组高频词辨析 7.虚词的用法 8.副词的用法 9.关于Chinglish 10.修辞 11.分词、合成词有关问题 12.名词的特殊用法及名词的数 1、摘要的类型 1.1 评论性摘要(Critical abstract) 1.2 说明性摘要(Descriptive abstract) 1.3 资料性摘要(Informative abstract) 1.4 资料-指示性摘要(Informative-indicative abstract) 1.5 结构式摘要(Structured abstract) 1.1 评论性摘要不常用,可见于综述,内容上侧重于评价/论理. ABSTRACT: Acute tubulointerstitial nephritis (ATIN) is a common disorder characterized by a spectrum of clinical manifestations ranging from asymptomatic urinary abnormalities to acute oliguric renal failure. Tubular dysfunction out of proportion to the degree of renal failure is an important clue to the diagnosis. This review describes its pathogenesis, pathophysiology, diagnosis, differential diagnosis and therapy, emphasizing the drug-induced form of ATIN. 1.2 说明性摘要 又称指示性或通报性摘要(Indicative abstract)：说明文章的内容范围，只是简单地报道研究主题，泛泛而谈，不涉及具体内容。一般只一到三句话，多见于临床医学论文。 Example The survival rates of a series of patients with unstable angina treated surgically and medically are compared. 1.3 资料性摘要: 详细、具体，重要观点和数据 Postoperative bleeding is usually attributed to stress ulcer; however, occult preoperative lesions could also be responsible (背景). To determine their frequency and nature, we prospectively examined 72 patients (目的) endoscopically prior to major elective operations. Entry criteria (入围标准) included a planned stay in the Surgical Intensive Care Unit, 2 days, and a negative history, physical examination, and stool guaiac (愈伤木脂，一种检便潜血试剂). Gastric and duodenal mucosae were scored separately, using a 0- to 7-point scale. Scores were graded negative (0), hyperemia (1), gastroduodenitis (2-5), mucosal erosions (6),