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05年成都新东方英语冲刺笔记 12.27作文（罗勇） 1、包装 ①书写、习惯 ②格式（如书信右上角的时间）、结构（两头小、中间大、字数分配50-80-50） ↗长句↖ ③选词造句→短句←交错使用（15句，1/3写长句，30字左右，长句后接一两句短句过渡） ↘难句：强调句（最好使） 2、货真价实 ↗情景文字 ①不要跑题（跑题则一半分数以下），审题（三维）→提纲 ↘图或表上的信息 ②内容衔接（思维跨度不要太大）→总述和概述 ↘注意句子完整 ③方法多样性 一、大作文 （一）描绘：描述性语言、可加议论性观点 （二）议述：作者意图、个人评价 （三）总结（好的：预期一下未来；坏的：采取措施防治）/ 例证 具体讲： 描绘：总体背景介绍+细节刻画图或表上的信息 1、背景介绍 例一：人类克隆（试管婴儿 / 一个老婆四个一模一样的老公，“谁才是真的？”） The problem o the use o genetic technologies on humn being hs [cused/roused public concern]/[loomed up/cropped up s burning/chllenging topic]. 例二：中国青少年犯罪比率上升（表） In the recent yers, Chin experienced/witnessed/ws plgued with n lrming increse in juvenile delinquency. 例三：人和社会的发展与环境的协调（寓意图、对比图） Currently, the topic/phenomenon o environment versus development hs been in the limelight. Nowhere is the clsh more evident/visible thn in Chin, where the lrgest popultion conronts deoresttion, pollution nd cid rin on rnge scle. 2、细节描绘 例：04年作文题 The ( set o) crtoon depicts vivid scene in which n thlete dripping swet is rushing to the end. Unquestionbly/Undoubtedly/Beyond doubt, he wins the gme but it is not the key messge conveyed/implied/delivered by the picture. pprently/Bsiclly, the striking eture is tht there is line mrked s both “the strt” nd “the end”, which mens ter the plyer cme to the inishing-line, new rce is witing to him. 另：对于图表描述不光要用上升下降等词，还要使用比较句型结构。 compre with/to …s much s tht… more thn, less thn by 2000, [the number rech the pek/bottom]/[the lrgest number ppered]. 议述 引言句+分论点、事实信息罗列 如：s mtter o ct, the purpose o the drwer/drwing is to mke us [py high/more ttention to…]/[rethink/hve resh look t…]. 例一：兼职prt-time job brinstorming I. dvntges: ↗pocket money ①mke money →ollow interest ↘tuition ees ↗on one’s own ↗lie→mke riends ②experience ↘custom, culture ↘work→ly solid oundtion or uture creer ↘be milir with new ields II. Disdvntges: ①money: be so young tht they re bound to be cheted/be induced to do… ②experience→science nd technology ccelerte/speed up → invlid ↘hu