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Revised GRE Analytical Writing考试形式Analysis of an issue, 30 minutesAnalysis of an argument, 30 minutes题库www . ETS. OrgGRE →Test takers → revised GRE → prepare for the test → analytical writing → topic poolTest Procedure1, Waiting Area2, Photo Room3, Test RoomAnalysis of an argumentPreparing strategies1, Critical thinking2, 熟读题目3, 闪光句型4, 形成各类问题自己的论证模板（argument模板是针对每个段落的模板）5, 列每道题提纲（注意提纲与模板的区别）6, 全文练习10－20篇How to analyze the topicArgument 题目结构：Evidence → conclusion Support审题：分清论据和结论，看清推理关系结论标志词：Therefore, thus, so, hence, consequently, evidently以及Clearly, should/must, 目的状语从句 Evidence:Facts Statistics ExamplesWays of argumentation:Analogy ComparisonAssumptions写作原则逻辑：切中要害语言：言简意赅词汇：正规书面写作语言句式：多变，适度复杂读题时需注意论据结论各自的讨论对象限定成分绝对化词汇：all, any, every, only, most, best Argument writing steps1, skim the topic and write the introduction读题，写开头；2, input topic sentences for body paragraphs输入正文段段首句；3, develop body paragraphs one by one逐一展开正文段；4, write the conclusion写结尾；5, checking检查How to write the introductionBasic elementsConcession (cc)Conclusion (cl)Evidence/Assumption (ev)Evaluation (el)(67)In the argument the arguer concludes that Rialto Theater must offer the same features as Apex, a newly opened theater, to attract more moviegoers (cl). As evidence the arguer points out many fancy functions featured by Apex and the dissatisfaction of moviegoers about high price of new movies (ev). However, lacking more accurate information we cannot make sure if the manager’s proposal could bring about desired effect as predicted (el).(142)In the argument the arguer claims that investing in high-quality gears could reduce the risk of being severely injured of roller skaters (cl). To support the recommendation, the arguer cites hospital statistics and assumes that the lack of protective equipment result in severe injuries in accidents (ev). However, several unwarranted assumptions render the argument unpersuasive as it stands.(1)In this argument, the writer employs a variety of evidence con