How_to_be_a_popular_student_演示文稿.pptVIP

最近，你看到某英文报纸正在征集主题为“如何才能受人欢迎”的短文，对此你很兴趣。请你根据以下提示谈谈自己的想法，给该报社投稿。 要点提示： 1. 衣着干净、整齐，保持微笑; 2. 诚实，乐于助人; 3. 懂得与人合作; 4. 其他。 注意： 1. 词数为100---120； 2. 文章的标题和开头已为你写好，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 How to be popular Most people would like to be popular with others, but what is the secret to achieving popularity (欢迎) ? 写作步骤 审题（人称、时态、体裁、要点归纳） 要点翻译 组词成句 联句成篇 修改 最近，你看到某英文报纸正在征集主题为“如何才能受人欢迎”的短文，对此你很兴趣。请你根据以下提示谈谈自己的想法，给该报社投稿。 要点提示： 1. 衣着干净、整齐，保持微笑; 2. 诚实，乐于助人; 3. 懂得与人合作; 4. 其他。 注意： 1. 词数为100---120； 2. 文章的标题和开头已为你写好，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 How to be popular Most people would like to be popular with others, but what is the secret to achieving popularity (欢迎) ? In fact, it is very simple. How to be popular Most people would like to be popular with others, but what is the secret to achieving popularity? In fact, it is very simple. The first step is to improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we dress well and keep smiling. Secondly , we should show respect to others. We are ready to help those people who have trouble. Thirdly, we should be strict with ourselves and try our best to succeed in our lessons and sports, music and so on. Treat everybody equally. * How to be popular 书面表达 Most people would like to be popular with others, but what is the secret to achieving popularity? Firstly, we should improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we dress well and keep smiling. In this way, people will surely be impressed by our confidence. Secondly, we should regard the class as our big family and be ready to help others whenever necessary. We must take an active part in all kinds of activities. Thirdly, we should show respect to others. We are ready to lend a hand to those people who are in need. 用词过于简单 The first step Secondly 句式重复，没有变化 内容需要 拓展 Thirdly 过渡词单一 Let’s improve a composition! The polished points : A. 较高级词汇 B.