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医学科技论文的英语表达及英文摘要的写作医学科技论文的英语表达及英文摘要的写作第一军医大学学报编辑部 王征爱概述非易事，但非不能；5000词汇；基本语感与英语思维英文摘写作要注意点： 内容的完整性；　数据跟文中/中文是否一致； 内容可以不全跟中文一致，应比中文更详细； 主谓一致：常识，但错误也不少见；时态：简单，但有时也很难掌握； 语态：有讲究，但基本不限)； 人称(可一可三)； 词法：重点； 语法：基本； 句法：简明1 摘要的类型综合起来，摘要有五种类型：1．1评论性摘要(Critical abstract)不常用，可见于综述，内容上侧重于评价、论理，例如下面一条。ABSTRACT: Acute tubulointerstitial nephritis (ATIN) is a common disorder characterized by a spectrum of clinical manifestations ranging from asymptomatic urinary abnormalities to acute oliguric renal failure. Tubular dysfunction out of proportion to the degree of renal failure is an important clue to the diagnosis. This review describes its pathogenesis, pathophysiology, diagnosis, differential diagnosis and therapy, emphasizing the drug-induced form of ATIN. [Am J Med Sci, 1990, 299: 392-410]1．2说明性摘要(Descriptive abstract) 又称指示性或通报性摘要(Indicative abstract)：说明文章的内容范围，只是简单地报道研究主题，泛泛而谈，不涉及具体内容。一般只一到三句话，多见于临床医学论文。下面是说明性摘要的两个例子。Example 1The survival rates of a series of patients with unstable angina treated surgically and medically are compared.Example 2 Angiographically monitored clinical trials of antilipidemic therapy have demonstrated that the progression of atherosclerosis may be slowed or even reversed. The clinical benefit observed in these trials strengthens the rationale for aggressive therapy in patients with known atherosclerotic disease. Additionally，these trials have provided father insight on the basis of clinical events and the risk factors associated with progression. Am J Cardiol, 1995, 76: 3AIn conclusion， we found no evidence of any reduction in blood pressure with greater smoking exposure. For smokers allowed to smoke in a natural manner before blood pressure assessment, greater smoking exposure indexed by saliva cotinine concentration is associated with higher systolic blood pressure levels. Am J Cardiol，1995；76(1): 95-7总之，我们没有找到因吸烟较多而致血压下降的证据。但常量吸烟者，在测血压前超常量吸烟(表现在唾液可铁宁浓度改变)会出现收缩压升高。 1．3 资料性摘要(Informative abstract) 正好与说明性摘要相反，资料性摘要内容比较具体、丰富，可以按IM