GRE作文范例5.doc

交通阻塞（Traffic jam）There is no doubt that traffic congestion becomes a growing worry for the residents of most urban areas. Some major roads are regularly choked with traffic in rush hours. The existing solutions to traffic jam mainly aim at creating metro bus systems and broadening major roads. Widening the existing roads can solve traffic snarls on some level. Soaring car ownership compounds the chronic annoying problem, so we must sharply reduce the heavy reliance on cars and drive a shift to the mass transportation. The government can create a system of customized bus routes and highlight the development of subways, trolleys and light rail. The effective combination of these solutions will enable the urban areas to possess a smooth traffic.  例证分析角度： 角度一： 政府可以把钱花在可能有助于后代的长期性研究上，因为有些研究是利国利民的，例如对于交通阻塞的治理，对于道路的合理规划。（3） 角度二： 重大的政策决定可以留给那些政治家和政府专家们，因为他们比老百姓拥有更多的信息，因此具有更好的判断力和远见。可以根据信息制定相关的政策来解决现阶段交通拥挤的治理问题。（79） 角度三： 要用发展的观点看问题，要有远见，不要总是把眼光放在当下的问题上，要有长远的打算。（56） 适用题目：Issue 3、56、79、97、 整容手术（Cosmetic surgery）Recently, there occurs to be a phenomenon that cosmetic surgery is becoming more and more popular. Never has one’s appearance been paid so much attention in any of the other ages, never has one’s appearance become his trouble as today—just a long ,narrow surgical knife needed. After noticing the opportunities, wealth brought by beauty, more and more people, especially women, tend to take a cosmetic surgery. But following a spate of recent plastic surgery, there are many horror stories, in order to prevent people to suffer serious postoperative infections, surgeons are warning potential patients to use officially accredited hospitals instead of private beauty parlors.  例证分析角度： 角度一 ： 很多人认为只是一些个人或者小团体（比如家庭、朋友、老师、名人）促成了他们的思维和行动。其实一直以来不是一些个人而是社会作为一个整体在定义我们和我们的态度。对于整容手术的问题许多人会认为受到她们周围已经经历过手术的人潜移默化地影响，然而整个社会的态度其实才是对个人影响比较大的。（22） 角度二： 在当代社会，很多人打造一个引人入胜的外表已经变得比外表下的内容更加重要，比如通过整容手术来取得一个更好的外表，实际上真正值得我们去追求的却是外表下的善良品质。（33） 角度三： 现在的人们太个人主义了。与其追求以个人为中心和孤立的目标，人们更需要明白满