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* 请根据图画和所给词语的提示，叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。然后，再根据此故事内容，发表你自己的感想（自拟），不得少于三点想法。 参考词汇： help, stop, knock…down, the fallen oil bottle, straighten, disagree, set a good example to,build up our society 注意：不要受所给词语的限制 要求：1．词数：100词左右；2．开头已给出。 One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over.______________________________________ 一、选择要点 左边一幅图 1.女孩跌倒 2.小明要帮她 3.小明的母亲阻拦他说：“不要扶，否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的。” 右边一幅图 1.有一天，小明母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子 2.小明说： “我扶了，你会说是我碰倒的” 二、简译要点 左边一幅图 1.One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. （试题中已给出） 2.Xiao Ming wanted to help the girl up. 3.His mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” 右边一幅图 1.Another day, the mother saw the fallen oil bottle on the ground. 2.Xiao Ming said to his mother, (注意小明的话要用虚拟语气) “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.” 三、增加要点,以使文章连贯 1.小明的母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子，而小明却视而不见，心情如何： 比如表示惊讶，震惊等 2.小明的母亲看到这种情形后，可能对小明说些什么： 比如：你为什么不把倒在地上的瓶子扶起来呢？ 翻译增加的要点 （Another day,） the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be，saying to him,“Can’t you see the fallen oil?Why can’t you straighten it up?” 四、自拟感想 1.我对小明母亲在上述图中所述故事中的做法看法：不同意 2.我想： ①父母应该为孩子树立好榜样 ②父母不仅要关心孩子的身体，还要关心他们的思想 ③父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的人是一件快乐的事。因为我们生活在社会这个大家庭中。 译出上述感想 1.I disagree with what the mother did in the story. 2. ①I think parents should set a good example to their children . ②They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds. ③They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. Because we live in the society which is a big family for all of us. 五、增加结尾句，整理成文 One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” Another day, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be. saying to him,“Can’t you see the fallen oil?Why can’t you straighten it up?”but Xiao Ming sa