高中英语写作技能教学句子.pptVIP

你有正门进入公园，继续往前走，就会来到一个小河边。 第一阶段: You enter the park by the main gate. You walk straight on. You come to a river. 第二阶段: You entered the park, walked straight on and then came to a river. 我沿着公园路向东走，看到一个老人出了 对面公园也向东走。 第二阶段: I walked along Park Road towards east and saw an elderly man come out of the park in the same direction. 第一阶段: I walked along Park Road towards east. I saw an elderly man come out of the park. The old man walked in the same direction. 第二阶段: He came into the room, took a chair, sat down and began to read a book. 第一阶段: He came into the room. He took a chair. He sat down. He began to read a book. 他走进房间，拿了一把椅子，坐下来开始 读书。 形成了同一主语，多个谓语的结构，使句子 流畅，简练。 第三阶段：巧用高级句 在完成了分句和合句训练后，应采用一些高级表达方式来提高句子的表达效果，进而增加文章的情感性和醒目性。如：强调句，感叹句，分词作定语，主从复合句，反意疑问句等 通过分析以下三个高级句子来体会其表达效果 I’ll go to a beach to see the seabirds flying in the dark-blue sky and drive a motorboat, sailing through clear water toward the rising sun. 本句成功的运用了现在分词短语flying in the dark-blue sky 作宾补，现在分词短语sailing through clear water toward the rising sun 作伴随状语，增加了表达效果。 该句使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句，提升了文章的表达档次。 At 8 o’clock in the morning, we arrived at the 5 bus station,where we were warmly welcomed by the drivers and conductors. Before we knew it, with the sun setting in the west, we had to say goodbye to the workers. 该句运用了+名词+复合宾语句型作 状语，生动形象地表达了夕阳西下， 我们不得不向工人们告别的依依不 舍之情。 书面表达典型句子 错误归类分析 一，汉式英语错误 二，词汇用法错误 三，句法错误 四，逻辑关系一致方面的错误 一，汉式英语错误 A：完全汉语语序：To my friend a letter B：名词动用: I always headache. C：形容词动用: I afraid I would make some mistakes. D：介词动用: My father often not at home. E：无主句: From here to the city by bus needs two hours. A letter to my friend. I always have a headache. I am afraid I would make some mistakes. My father is often not at home. It takes two hours from here to the city by bus. 二，词汇用法错误 A: 动词类： Thank you to have saved my dog. B:形容词副词 :He is much higher than his brother. C:介词类We’re going to visit the farm in next week. D:代词类: My dictionary is more expensive than her. E:名词：I am g