作文错误分析-2017.pptVIP

常见的写作错误 一、主语错误 1. 主语缺失 On the great wall can see a lot of cars and buses. 2. 非名词主语 Travel on train is very interesting. Travelling We on the great wall 3. 主谓错位 　 Reading books can acquire knowledge. 　 People can acquire knowledge through / by reading books. 二、谓语错误 1. 主谓不一致 　 This trip make me very happy. makes/ made 2. 多重谓语 (1) A lot of birds was fly in the sky. (2)I am very enjoy it. I enjoyed it very much. (3) There is a love story, it is about Xue Pinggui and Wang Baochaun. 3. 情态动词和动词搭配（情态动词+ do） On the way to Xi’an, we could enjoyed the beautiful scenery. (连动错误——严重错误) flying enjoy / like /love sth very much / a little Don’t like sth at all/dislike sth at all which enjoy 3. 主系表结构 　 I feel happily. (adj 作表语；以ly结尾形容词 Lovely, friendly, elderly, lively, lonely ) 4. “有”字翻译 （1）I have a little tired. 　 (2) Xi’an has many tourist attractions.5 feel 有点累，饿，伤心，远 用 主系表： It is a bit far away. 某地，某个时间有… 用there be：There was a sports meeting last week . There are many tourist attractions in Xi’an 5. 介词缺失或多余 （1）We stayed in there three days. for three days here, there 副词前无介词: arrive/ leave/get/stay here，there 四、代词错误 1. 偷梁换柱 　 If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. ① If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us alone. ② If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. 2. 指代不明 　 Teachers should tell the students the heavy burden they have to bear. Teachers should tell the students the heavy burden students have to bear. 五、形容词、副词错误 　 The change of the weather will make the place look differently. 　 The change of the weather will make the place look different. 六、搭配错误 　（1）　The price of meat is so expensive that we could not afford it. 　　The price of meat is so high that we could not afford it. （2）介词搭配不当 in September, 1945