高二 书面表达讲评与指导 高二英语课件教案.pptVIP

* 书面表达练习讲评 暨写作技巧指导 What makes a good composition? 1. Good handwriting 2.The fewer errors, the better I really don’t know what should I do. I should 1.句子结构问题 There is a factory which near my home. is 我学到的写作技巧 NO.1 注意句子_____ 的正确搭配 结构 He has already apologized to the people for what he had done and gave/give some money to them. given did 2.谓语动词形式问题 The waste waster was flowed directly into the river. flows That have resulted in unsafe drinking water. has 我学到的写作技巧 NO.2 注意谓语动词的形式--- _____、_____、_______ 语态 单复数 时态 3.词汇用法问题。 It always pushes/pulls/flows waste into the rivers and gives out poisonous gases. pours I suggest them cut back on production. they Suggest (建议)+ n. (that) + _____ + ________ （_________ ）+ 动名词 主语 (should) do 宾格/所有格 them/ their cutting 王老师建议我们买本英语字典。 Mr Zhao suggested that we (should) buy an English dictionary. Mr Zhao suggested us / our buying an … causes unsafe drinking water makes The factory often pours lots of waste into the river, which causes the drinking water unsafe. cause sth. cause sb. sth. cause sb. to do… causes drinking water to be unsafe If I do so, he’ll loss his job. lose n. I want to forgive for him. forgive me forgive sb. for doing… It makes bad/harmful effects on people’s health. has/brings about Looking these, I can’t stand with what they do. seeing put up with 我学到的写作技巧 NO.3 注意用词的________ 适当使用_______词汇 较高级 准确性 Is the following a good passage? Dear Annie, There is a factory near my home. It often pours the waste into the river. This causes unsafe drinking water. It gives out poisonous gases. It has a bad effect on the people’s health. I can’t stand seeing this. I want to ask them to cut back on the production. I also want to stop them from giving out waste water and poisonous gases. However, my father is the manager of the factory. This will make him lose his job. He has apologized to the local people for this and given them some money. I want to forgive him, but I don’t think he is right. What should I do? To i