英语专业四级作文赏析 袁光辉.pptVIP

英语专业四级作文赏析 Is it wise to make friends online ? Nowadays ,with the growing popularity of Internet , more and more people make friends online . It has become an increasingly hot topic whether it is wise to make friends online. Different people have different attitudes towards this issue .Some think it is a good idea while others are against it . As for me , I think it is wise in that it has more advantages than disadvantages . There are several reasons for this . First of all ,people get more opportunities to get acquainted with those who may share common interests and exchange ideas . Secondly ,it is both time saving and money saving to be with your friends on condition that you get access to the Internet. You are no longer oceans apart from your friends . Conversely, they are a finger’s click away. What’s more ,your friends may come from every walk of life ,from whom you can learn a lot due to their diversified cultural backgrounds. Last but not least ,compared to the communication online in real life ,communication online makes you feel free to get across your ideas .On the other hand ,every coin has two sides .We can not ignore the fact that making friends online is also risky for the reason that we may be convinced of others’ identity from nowhere ,which is a potential risk ,of which we should be full aware. From what has been mentioned above ,we can draw the conclusion that making friends online brings us more benefits. Analysis 1.开头先介绍背景：现在越来越多的人网上交友。 2.用Some …..,others …..句型引出人们对以上两种态度的思考。 3.用As for me 引出自己的观点：网上交友好。 中间部分 1.文章从4个部分展开论证，试用表示顺序和递进关系的短语 使得论述得以层层递进，条理清晰。既：机会更多 ，省钱省时间，朋友来自的领域广泛，网上沟通更加自由，充分。 2.另一方面，指出事物具有两面性，谨慎网络交友，是论述更加全面，完整。 结尾处。 最后用we can draw the conclusion that ……. 句型引出结论，网上交友跟我们带来了更多的益处。 闪光词汇 1. growing popularity of …….的普及和流行。 2. get acquainted with 与…….熟识 3. share common interests 有共同的兴趣 4.Time saving and money saving 省时省钱 5.apart from 远离 6.conversely 相反地 7.every walk of life 各行各业 8. diversified cultural backgrounds 多种文化背景 9. We c