英语：高考书面表达之赢取高分策略课件.pptVIP

网 上 阅 卷 流 程 将考生试卷统一编号 ‖ 扫描进电脑 ‖ 阅卷系统随机分发至老师评分 ‖ 两人判分取平均值 网上阅卷老师的心理 阅卷时会预测第二个阅卷老师与自己的评分差值，确保不送第三人阅卷，一般给分“中庸” 阅卷速度不会过慢，一般50至65秒 对非常好的作文，字迹又非常漂亮的，肯定给高分。 书面表达如何写？ “取悦”阅卷老师应注意的几点 1.字（字迹、字数、字体、字距）； 2.分段（最好三段，至少两段）； 3.版面（整洁，忌超格、污迹、涂黑等）； 4.篇章纽带（用必要的篇章纽带可使文章读起来更像地道的英文，避免汉式英语的生硬和枯燥）； 5.忌低级错误（主谓、时态不一致，单词拼写错误等）； 6.亮点（使用高级结构、优美语句。每段用一到两个较高级词汇或句型，不宜过多，以免出错）。 一.怎样使用高级词汇 1.那里的学生不需要交书费。 译文1）The students there needn’t pay for their books. 译文2）Books are free for the students there. 2.他越说越激动。 译文1）When he spoke ,he felt more and more excited. 译文2）The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. 怎样使用高级词汇 3. 我的家乡正在修建一条新铁路。 译文1) A new railway is being built in my hometown. 译文2) A new railway is under construction in my hometown. 4. 我当医生的梦想终于实现了。 译文1) My dream of becoming a doctor has finally come true. 译文2) My dream to be a doctor has eventually been realized. 二、句式变化技巧 [一] 使用倒装句、强调句 1)只有这样你才能解决这个问题。 译文1.You can solve this problem only in this way. 译文2.Only in this way can you solve this problem. 2)这位小伙子帮助那位老太太从着火的厨房里逃出来。 译文1. This young guy helped the old lady out of the burning kitchen. 译文2. It was this young guy who helped the old lady out of the burning kitchen. [二] 使用各种从句 1.我们都知道地球是圆的. 译文1. We all know that the earth is round. 译文2. As we all know, the earth is round 2.他虽然累了,但是还继续工作. 译文1.He was tired, but he still went on working. 译文2. Tired as he was, he still went on working. [三]、运用并列句、感叹句、省略句 1.我们今天早上在校门口集合一起去了那里. 译文1)We met at the school gate this morning. We went there together. 译文2)This morning we met at the school gate and went there together. 2.你给我买的生日礼物真好! 译文1) You’ve bought a wonderful gift for me. 译文2) What a wonderful gift you’ve bought for me. 3.我们将竭尽全力地帮助他摆脱困境. 译文1) We’ll do our best to help him