GREArgument写作范文解析智课教育旗下智课教育.pdf

智 课 网 G R E 备 考 资 料 GRE Argument写作范文解析-智课教育旗下智课教育 GRE Argument写作范文写作解析，下面是例文： Six months ago the region of Forestville increased the speed limit for vehiclestraveling on the regions highways by ten miles per hour. Since that changetook effect, the number of automobile accidents in that region has increased by15 percent. But the speed limit in Elmsford, a region neighboring Forestville,remained unchanged, and automobile accidents declined slightly during the samesix-month period. Therefore, if the citizens of Forestville want to reduce thenumber of automobile accidents on the regions highways, they should campaignto reduce Forestvilles speed limit to what it was before the increase. 简单翻译：6个月前，Forestville地区提高了本地区公路上的最高 时速限制，比原先提高了10公里。由于这个变化的影响，本地区车祸的 数量提高了 15%。但是，Elmsford地区(和Forestville地区相邻)并没有 改变最高时速限制，它的车祸数量在同样的6个月里，反而有少量的减 少。因 此，如果Forestville市民想要减少公路上的车祸数量，他们应该 想办法将本地区的最高时速限制减少到改变前的状态。 分析题目：找到原题逻辑结构关系 论据： F地区提高最高时速限制 10公里 〉 车祸发生率增加15% E地区(和F相邻)没有改变最高时速限制〉少量的减少 结论： F地区如果想要减少车祸，就要恢复到原来的最高时速限制。 大家注意我们一定要搞清结论是什么，这一点我们可以通过信号性 标志词来判断 ：thus, therefore,so, consequently等等。 The argument is well-presented, but not thoroughly well-reasoned. (说明论点有问题)By making a comparison of the region of Forestville, the town withthe higher speed limit and therefore automobile accidents, with the region ofElmsford, an area of a lower speed limit and subsequently fewer accidents, theargument for reducing Forestvilles speed limits in order to decrease accidentsseems logical.(归纳论点，准备发起进攻) 第二段 ：第一轮攻击 攻击点：可能有其他原因，造成提高限速后车祸的增加。(不一定是 限速引起的)(本段主题句) 论证结构：总--分--总 However, the citizens of Forestville are failing to consider other possiblealternatives to the increasing car accidents after the raise in speed limit. (它因法，这个以后我们也会讲到，也就是说造成提高限速后车祸的 增加可能有其他原因，ISSUE一样，这也是本段中心句) Such alternatives mayinclude the fact that there are less (lessàfewer) reliable cars traveling the roads in Fores