第18周 图画作文高中英语书面表达18周满分计划2018年版原卷.doc

第18周 图画作文 01 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的＂地球日＂系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以＂Actions for a Greener Earth＂为题，给校刊＂英语角＂写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。 注意：词数不少于60。 提示词：地球日 Earth Day _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【构思框架】 本篇文章从环保的角度给出了以＂地球日活动＂为主题的四幅图画，这类题目对于学生的审题提出了更高的要求；另外图片类作文还需注意对图片先要进行简要的描述，惯用如：As the picture is shown to us，...这样的句式来开头；主干部分需要主要体现的内容是我们要不遗余力地学习，克服自己所遇到的一切困难获取知识，图片作文的立意一定是积极向上的，这一点十分重要。 1．认真审题 审题时注意汉语提示语与图片的结合：(1)确定人称、时态：第三人称为主，一般现在时为主；(2)确定要求：本文是一篇记叙文，叙述＂地球日行动的过程和内容＂，并且谈出个人体会等。 2．确定内容 确定图片所描述的内容：(1)海报内容；(2)收集废弃物以便回收再用；(3)赠送急需家庭，变废为宝；(4)亲身做法，激励他人。 3．确定要点 按照确定的内容，提炼要点并且用适当的句式、短语来表述，句式要多变，语法现象要灵活。 4．连句成篇 尽量多地使用恰当的关联词、插入语，使文章条理清楚，语句衔接紧凑。’ interest, learn about the activity 　　图 2：be divided into groups, transform waste into delicate articles, devote …to … 　　图 3：hold an activity in the nearby community, promote the awareness of Green Earth to more people, turn waste into wealth, show support, give the articles to neighbors 图 4：hold a lecture in the auditorium, introduce the whole process of … and the importance of … 【优秀满分范文】 ①A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth. Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. ②We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles, and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people.