高三第二次月考writingPPT课件.pptVIP

2009学年高三年级第二次月考 书面表达分析;About the rules;2. Good : (20----24 分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务. --覆盖所有主要内容与要点. --应用了一些语法复杂结构和词汇. --语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确, 只出现个别错误 ，是使用较复杂结构或高级 词汇所致; ---应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构 紧凑、流畅。达到了预期的写作目的.;3. Completed (15 --- 19分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务. --虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有的主要内容. --应用的语法结构或词汇能满足任务的要求. --有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影 响理解. --应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容 连贯. 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的. ;4. Not good : (10—14分) 未恰当完成试题规定的任务. --漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容. --语法结构单调,词汇项目有限. --有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解. --较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者.;Possible version Some agree that we should build the industrial area. If we do so, many new jobs can be created, which will increase people’s income and improve their living standards. What’s more, it can push the development of the local economy and the natural resources can also be made good use of. But others oppose the idea, because they think it will pollute the environment. They believe that it will produce noise which will disturb people’s peaceful life. Furthermore, a lot of farmland will be built on. ; Personally, I agree with the second view. Economic development should never be at the cost of the environment. We must pay attention to sustainable development so that we’ll have a better hometown in the future. ;About the problems;About the problems;Errors in writing; ; ; ; ;振兴经济 提高生活水平 增加就业机会 占用耕地 造成环境污染 产生噪音;Some people are in favor of the plan, claiming that the construction of the industrial area not only can boost the economy which will improve the life condition, but also may make full use of local resource. Moreover, as a social factor, it can also lead to the increase of people’s occupation opportunities. But on the other hand, some citizens hold an opposite view towards the issue, condemning that the industrial area programme will absolutely take up a lot of farmland, and the goal will be fulfilled at the cost of environmental pollution. Equally important, the noise made during the construction is yet another