new一年级12班英语作文中出现的错误句子.doc

1.What I Do on Weekly Saturday Outing 2. My Dream  1.132.5李亮亮：写得不错，但单词与单词的间隔太大—a child 2.133闫晓彬：I also do other things except visiting the river. ’m very interested in those things that is not discovered by human beings.纠正：The life-Life; without后加a /is not—have not been 3.129.5杨浩：I thought the teachers are the greatest men in the world. 纠正：are—were; men-people 4.114王伟领：The time goes away as wind. It takes away from me when I dont feel it. 姚亚男：At 4 oclock to 7 oclock on Saturday afternoon is my happiest time in a week. ’clock on Saturday afternoons. Sept.23: The news from reporters can tell us what happened in the world. 纠正：happened—is happening 6.118.5刘格格：I am similar with the sights over there. —familiar Sept.23: But my favorite job is engineer. 纠正：is后加to be 7.120.5姚坤林：I think my family is the most comfortable place. —home Sept.23: Though it’s difficult for me to learn these projects, I don’t give up. 纠正：projects--subjects 8.119张玉展：The bookstore is too small and has little story books. I prefer to spend my left time in playing basketball. I like sports, excise can keep healthy. —few; left time—remaining time; exercise前加and I believe that Sept.23: It’s also another reason that I want to be a scientist. 纠正：It’s---There’s 9.123赵晓伟：Be enclosed in the school for a week, I feel the Ru River is a good place for relax. —Being; relax—relaxation Sept.23: Hip Hop is fashion. 纠正: is后加in 10.117李京：It also let me remind about something good. —also remind me Sept.23: They can help the child becomes a brave, friendly, and knowledgeable citizen. 纠正：the child-children; a去掉；citizen—citizens 11.115.5李文龙：These time help me to get relaxing.—the; relaxing—relaxed Sept.23: The doctor is the best career in the world. 纠正：the doctor—Being a doctor 12.126王娇娇：There are some fishmen and visitors on boats. We only buy a little something to eat. 高燕京：I dont eat much too expensive snacks. At the end, I r to school in time. I spare some time washing my dirty clothes. 纠正：At the end—In the end; w