Unity Coherence整体性和连贯性.ppt

TOEFL WRITING Skills . Unity Coherence 托福写作技巧 ---整体性和连贯性 Unity 整体性 Topic Topic Sentence Supporting Sentence Supporting Sentence Example Example Toefl writing skills . Unity 整体性 Independent Writing: Do you agree or disagree that fast food has bettered people’s life? Toefl writing skills . 反例： Food is an indispensible part of people’s life. Even the way of cooking could impact People’s physical health, and then influence their mental status. Based on the analysis on the real changes fast food has made to our life, it has obviously worsened the status of people’s living quality. Fast food weakens our body. Fast food chain stores is booming everyday. A recent survey found that 70% of adults order fast food instead of cooking by themselves and 80% of teenagers choose fast food chain stores as their eating place. Another survey shows that McDonalds is becoming a huge business which worthes billions of dollars. More and more people choose fast food as their regular meal but their body is weakened. Despite of physical unhealthy, with more and more people eating fast food outside, they barely have time spending with their family on dinner table. In this case, the bond between family members may be weakened day by day. 影响家庭关系不属于 速食影响生理健康 这一论点 速食很流行证明不了 速食影响身体健康 On the contrary, fast food sometimes make our life easier. For example, I have a meeting at 12 o’clock sharp but I still haven’t finish my presentation. Such a tight deadline makes me decided to order take-away food for lunch so that I could spare more time for the presentation. Instead of spending time going to a decent restaurant and wasting time for each course serve, I could finish my presentation in my office, and at the same time finish my lunch. Fast food saves time and offers convenience. Fast food changed our life, speeding up the pace of life and make it easy. However, as I have stated, too much fast food may weaken our physical health. Thus, even if it is convenient, people s