英语写作教学课例 .ppt

 Writing How to improve our writing language Characteristics of a full-mark composition 2. Complete: cover all the information with nothing lost. Characteristics of a full-mark composition 2. Complete: cover all the information with nothing lost. * * * 高 中 英 语 作 文 讲 评 白银市平川中学 周有勤 书面表达: 假定你是李华, 北京人，2008年奥运会将在北京举办, 现在正在招募志愿者, 你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。 内容应包括: 个人情况：年龄、性别、学历 个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况 承诺：提供最佳服务 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 生词：申请–--- apply (v.), application (n.)； 志愿者–volunteer 书面表达: 假定你是李华, 北京人，2008年奥运会将在北京举办, 现在正在招募志愿者, 你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信. 内容应包括: 个人情况：年龄、性别、学历 个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟 悉本地情况 承诺：提供最佳服务 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 生词：申请–--- apply (v.), application (n.)； 志愿者–volunteer Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2008 Olympics. I’m a boy and I’m 18. I was born in Beijing. I’m a middle school student. I want to do something for the 2008 Olympics. I’m good at English. I like sports. I’m good at communicating with others. I like helping others. I’m familiar with Beijing. It is important for the work. If you give me the chance, I’ll try my best to offer the best service to others. Please accept my application. I won’t disappoint you! Looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 18分 3. Correct: use correct words, sentences and punctuation marks in expression. 4. Various: use varieties of words and sentence patterns to express the ideas freely. 5. Cohesive: use proper connecting words, phrases and even sentences to connect the context, making the writing cohesive in meaning. 1. Clear Clean: handwriting is clear and clean. 书写整洁