统练作文+西城一模作文讲评幻灯片.ppt

统练作文讲评你班李明和王英同学在高三阶段有不同的学习方法，请描述下列各图，适当增加细节使文章连贯，并谈谈你的看法。 注意： 　　1. 短文开头已给出。 　　2. 词数不少于60。 审题 文体：对比叙事（夹叙夹议） 人称：第三人称+第一人称 时态：一般现在时 结构：总说---李明----王英----你的观点 总说---李明+王英----你的观点 Example Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have different learning methods.(总说） Li Ming often______ in class ________ listening to the teacher. As a result，he ________ lots of points that the teacher _______ and it usually _______ him more time to finish his homework. So he _____ to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. 　However，Wang Ying _____ quite a different way of learning. She ______ attentively and _______ to catch everything that the teacher _______ in class. Because of this，she ______ less time doing her homework, which _____ it possible for her to go to bed early. In my opinion，Wang Ying _______ more effectively in class and ______ more free time to enjoy herself，so I prefer her learning method. Useful expressions Li Ming has a bad habit of studying . ….. However , Wang Ying is different. … In my opinion, …… 专心听讲 listen to the teacher attentively concentrate on what the teacher says in class try to have a better understanding of what the teacher says listen to the teacher carefully , trying not to miss any key point given by the teacher. 认真记笔记 take notes carefully redouble efforts to take notes Useful expressions 熬夜 stay up late till midnight can’t finish assignments till midnight Not knowing a lot of key points the teacher has taught , he has to stay up for dealing with even a simple problem. 睡觉 go to bed early fall asleep sleep soundly/ have a sound sleep get enough sleep Useful expressions In my opinion , Wang Ying’s method is worth learning . She makes great use of time and gets twice the result with half the effort . We should learn from her . To my understanding , I approve of the method of Wang Ying. From my perspective, we should learn from Wang Ying because she develo