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如何写说服戒烟的电子邮件【写作任务】假设你是李华，听说你的朋友杰克（Jack）最近染上了吸烟的坏习惯。请你给他写一封电子邮件，说明吸烟的危害并劝说他戒烟。注意：词数100左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。Dear Jack,I’m so sorry to learn that you have begun to smoke.?? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】1. 审题定调该写作为电子邮件，属于应用文，通常包括称呼语、正文、结束语和署名。2. 确定主体内容全文可分为三部分：第一部分：提出观点，即吸烟有害健康；第二部分：分析吸烟的危害；第三部分：劝告杰克戒烟。3. 确定时态、人称该邮件主体为议论文，写作时常用一般现在时，人称以第二、三人称为主。4. 常用表达I’m sorry to learn that ...Smoking is very harmful to ...Smoking can do harm to ...Smoking increases your risk of ... ... be at the risk of ...... put people in great dangerSome diseases may cause death.Others cause serious damage to ...【参考范文】Dear Jack,I’m so sorry to learn that you have begun to smoke. Smoking is very harmful.Firstly, smoking increases your risk of developing more than 50 health problems, such as heart disease and lung cancer. Some may cause death and others can cause serious damage to your health.Secondly, smoking also does harm to non-smokers. People who breathe in secondhand smoke are at the risk of getting the same health problems as smokers.Thirdly, smoking may also cause fires. The burning end of a cigarette, though small, can sometimes cause a big fire, which puts many people in great danger. Some may even die from the fire.I hope you will give up smoking after learning about these risks and stay healthy.???????????????????? ?????? Yours,Li Hua