高三英语写作dbug6zq7.ppt

* Presentation 最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Should we give more attention to students’ health or grades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。 支持方的理由 反对方的理由 你的看法及理由 1．可以促进对体育的重视； 2．可以增强学生的体魄； 3．更有利于提高学习效率。 1．学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途； 2．过高的要求学生难以达到； 3．长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。 (考生自行发挥2—3点) 注意：1．词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。 Should we give more attention to students’ health or grades? The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity. …. * 如何算是一篇好文章？ 　 1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂） 要点全 连接词 * Should we give more attention to students’ health or grades? The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity. It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day, junior school students, 1,500 and senior school students, 2,000.Different people always offer various views. Some people say yes to this activity. They think, for one thing, it can make people pay more attention to physical education; for another, running can improve students’ health and help them study efficiently so they can have good grades. However, others hold opposite opinions about the activity. They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future depends on their grades in their subjects. Meanwhile, many can’t meet the high requirements. What’s worse, some will suffer cold and injuries. In my opinion, it’s all right for schools to care about students’ health and carry out the activity step by step. Remember a good body helps make high efficiency. * 抄 改 连 扩 抓 审 书面 表达 书面表达六步