高三英语二轮习 第1部分 专题6 书面表达 技法7 画龙点睛的结束语.docVIP

PAGE PAGE 2 技法7| 画龙点睛的结束语 结束语即结尾。一篇英语作文如果结尾写得好，就会强化阅卷老师对你所写作文的好感，从而给你的作文打高分。 1. 如何写好结尾？ 结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，升华主题的作用。主要有以下几种写法： (1)照应开头 Everyone enjoys beautiful things.And seeing sunrise may be one of the most unusual experiences in our life. (2)复现主题 We must protect the water as well as find ways to reuse it. If not, the last drop of water will be a teardrop. (3)总结式 In a word, a friend in need is a friend indeed. May all of us treasure friendship. (4)引用式 I believe my dream will come true one day because “Where there is a will, there is a way.” (5)希望式 The Internet is now very important to me because it not only gives me a lot of fun but also it is very useful.I like it and hope you will like it too. (6)问题式 Will you join us in the next century? How romantic and fantastic it will be! 2．书信的结束语 书信的结束语，我们见到最多的是Im looking forward to .../Looking forward to ...。另外我们还可以使用一些功能句式，向对方表示友善的感谢或亲切的问候，表达愿望或期待等。除了Im looking forward to ...之外，常用的结束语还有： 求职信可说：I would be grateful if you would consider my application. I hope to have the opportunity of an interview. 咨询信可说：Im waiting for your early reply. 感谢信可说：I must thank you again for your generous help. Please accept my gratitude, now and always. 建议信可说：In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful. I hope you will find these suggestions practical. Ill appreciate you taking my suggestion into account. 投诉信可说：Id appreciate it if you ... as soon as possible. 邀请信可说：Im longing to hear from you. 　　(2016·全国乙卷)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 考生作文 点评与优化 作文提升 　　If you can help me，I will very thank you.I hope to hear from your reply as early as possible. [名师点评] (1)表达档次较低，as ...as possible 本来是一个很好的表达方式，也由于early的错用而大打折扣(应为as soon as possible)。 (2)very thank you与hear from your reply更是汉语式英语，属于低级的错误。 [尝试优化] (高考范文)Looking forward to your reply.And Id be really thankful. (满分作文)I w