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写作指导 一、话题是环境保护，介绍地球一小时活动的发展过程，根据表格内容需要用到各种时态，如一般现在时、一般过去时或现在完成时，所以解题时一定要注意时态的运用； 二、因提示内容没有明显的谓语动词，因此在选择动词时一定要注意准确、地道； 三、要避免按表格提示逐条翻译，如： The time is …. The form of the activity is to turn off… The purpose is to… 四、词组表达 1.2009年3月28日 on March 28th , 2009 (不是in March 28th 2009/ on 2009, 3, 28) 2.每年3月最后一个星期六，当地时间晚上8：30---9：30 from 8:30 to 9:30 p.m (between 8:30 and 9:30) of the local time on the last (不是lastest) Saturday of March 英语的时间表达：从小到大，和汉语表达相反！ 3.熄灯 turn off the lights/ switch off the lights (而不是close/take off 、 turn off the lamps) 4.提高环保意识，应对气候变化 raise/improve/strengthen/increase the sense/ awareness/ consciousness of protecting environment/ environmental protection 5.应对气候变化 react to /deal with/ pay attention to the climate change (不能用adapt to!) 6.2007年始于悉尼，之后迅速发展 1)Earth Hour began/started in Sydney in 2007 and then spread /developed all over the world at an amazing speed 2)Dating back to 2007 in Sydney, Earth Hour spread around the world at an amazing speed. 7.2009年约90个国家4000多个城市10亿人参加 1)This year /In 2009, about one billion people from 4000 cities of 90 countries participated in / joined in / took part in Earth Hour. 2)This year/ In 2009, more than 4000 cities from 90 countries and some one billion people from around the world joined in Earth Hour. （范文） 注意：数字一定要用阿拉伯数字写，不要用英语写，否则容易写错，如：90个国家，很多人写成:ninty countries; 4000多个城市，很多人写成：more than four thousands citys ,这是相当低级的错误。 Star sentences: 1.This activity calls on people to turn off the lights for an hour, aiming at increasing public awareness of environmental protection and facing climate change sensibly. 2.Orginated in Sydney in 2007, the activity spread fast with one billion people from around 90 countries and 4000 cities participating in it in 2009. 3.It requires participants to keep lights off for one hour in order to improve their awareness of protecting the environment and dealing with the climate change. 典型的错误： In 2009, there were about 90 countries, more than 4000 cities and one billion people joi