《公开课课件之如何在高考英语作文中增加细节》.ppt

How to add reasonable details to your article 假定你是李华。上周日在地铁站捡到了英国人Steven 的护照。请你用英语给你市某英文报社编辑写一封信，内容包括： 1.简述时间过程; 2.交代护照相关信息; 3.委托报社刊登招领启事. 注意: 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 广东一模书面表达 一个问题 主体信息写完往往只有60-70个字，不足100词，怎么弥补词数？ 需要“适当增加细节，以使行文连贯”。 Dear editor, I’m LiHua, a high school student in our city. I’m writing to tell you a piece of urgent information. I picked up a passport last Sunday in the subway station when I was taking a ride home. There was nobody around when I found it on a waiting bench. The owner of it is Steven who comes from England. Having lost the passport, he must be very anxious, but I have no idea how to return it to him. So I need your help. I wish you could post a notice on your newspaper to tell him about the missing passport, so that he can get it back. I would appreciate it if you could do me the favor. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 结果 交际语 心理感受 具体化 同位语 原因 如何适当增加细节 增加同位语 补全前因后果或目的 适当将写作内容具体化 写出个人感受、评价或后果 补充功能性（交际性）语言 What kind of information can often be added to your article? 1 增加同位语 1 I am LiHua, _________________________________ (我们学校的学生会主席). / _________________________________________(来自中国的一位交换生). 2. I want to have a pen friend, ________________________________________ (希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩). Chairman of the Students’ Union of my school. an exchange student from China. hopefully a girl with interests similar to mine. 2.补充前因后果或目的 ___________________________________________ (因为知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣），I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity. ______________________________________________________________________(为了获得一些实践经验) I’m planning to take a part-time job in a foreign company. (1) Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese traditional culture, (2)In order to get some practical experience, _______________