新人教版九年级英语第四单元写作指导.ppt

写作步骤 审题立意 定主人称时态 用词得当 检查修改 写作时 找关键词 由词组句 组句成段 扩句成段 Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark. Talking 3a Write notes about how you have changed in your appearance, personality and hobbies. Then talk with a partner about your changes. Appearance: tall, short, fat, thin, slim,strong, young, old, straight hair, curly hair, long hair, short hair, a medium body … Talking Personality: humorous,outgoing,serious, funny, smart, friendly, shy, helpful, quiet,active,brave,unfriendly... hobbies: read cartoon/ novel, sing,dance, play football/ basketball… Talking What makes a good composition? Discussion Content Everything needed included which is related to your view. (内容要完整) Structure Good beginning and ending (好的开头结尾) Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) Proper linking words between sentences（使用恰当的连接词） Write sentences by using used to: 1. I/have curly hair/have straight hair I used to have curly hair,but now I have straight hair. 2.I/so fat/thin I used to be so fat,but now I am thin. Write sentences by using used to: 3.I/shy/outgoing and brave I used to be shy,but now I am outgoing and brave. 4.I/read books on martial arts/read books on Western culture I used to read books on martial arts,but now I read books on Western culture. Write sentences by using used to: 1. 我过去是走路上学的。 I used to go to school on foot/walk to school. 2.我过去喜欢跑步，但现在我喜欢打篮球。 I used to like running,but now I like playing basketball. Proper linking words between sentences（连接词） first, second, third (the most important) firstly, secondly, thirdly (finally), 首先，第二，第三 表示举例子： for example 例如 Take…for example 以…为例 such as 比如 like 像 表示转折： however (but) 然而(但是) 表示个人观点： In my view 在我看来 In my opinion 我认为 As far as I am concerned 就我而言 Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be like? Which change is the most important one, and why? 3b