高考英语作文地润色与提高课件.ppt

对不起，我不能和你一起去北京了。 I’m sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you. Would you accept my heartfelt apology that I can’t make it to Beijing with you as we have planned. I sorry you I can’t with you go Beijing. 英语写作中被认为是亮点的东西 1. 一般中学生驾驭不了的词汇和句型结构； 2. 恰到好处的名言、谚语等； 3. 一语中的的修辞手法。 很多 a lot of a good number of (C. n. ) a large amount of (U. n.) a great deal of (U. n.) a mountain of homework a sea of people abundant / adequate take part in join in participate in compete in sign up for … 参加 fit in adapt to adjust to cope with … be used to be accustomed to feel at home … 适应 follow my dream / passion pursue my goal seek after my destination / objective 追求梦想 about / around/ some roughly approximately more or less 大约 so/ therefore as a result as a consequence consequently 因此 important crucial critical significant of much value 重要的 恰到好处的名言、谚语能使文章增色 1.Practice makes perfect. 2.God helps those who help themselves. 3.Where there is a will, there is a way. 4.One false step will make a great difference. 5.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 6.Experience is the mother of wisdom. 7. All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 8. More haste, less speed. 9. It’s never too old to learn. 10. All that glitters is not gold. 11. Look before you leap. 12. Rome was not built in a day. 13.Great minds think alike. 14.well begun, half done. 15. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 大胆使用基本的修辞手法 比喻 All the students are as busy as bees preparing for the coming exams. 所有学生都在忙着准备考试。 All the students are busy preparing for the coming exams. 夸张 我感觉压力很大。 I feel great pressure. I felt as if I were under a mountain and I cant even breathe. 拟人 我感觉所有同学都在嘲笑我。 I feel all my classmates laughing at me. I felt as if even the birds on the trees are laughing at me. 亮点的任务： 使你的作文从千万篇作文中脱颖而出。 谢 谢！ 高考英语作文的润色与提高 宋武栋 山东省实验中学 专题一：优秀作文的基本特征 优秀高考英语作文的六个基本特征 1、层次不乱 2、句式多变 3、亮点若干 3、巧妙串联 4、蠢错不犯 6、整洁卷面 层次不乱 开头：第一个要点 主体：第二个要点 结尾：