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英语作文(姐) 一、开头句型。 There is general(much) discussion (debate/ controversy) today (nowadays) on (about) the issue (problem) of....... Those who object to ...argue that... They believe that... But people who advocate.... With the development (improvement/ rise/growth/ of...), XXX is playing an increasingly big role in society (family) life. Nowadays,it is commonly believed that......,they argue that, but I wonder whether..../ I hold that...... Recently / Nowadays/ Currently/ In recent years/ In the past few years/ , there is a general attitude that...... Recently the problem of... has been brought to public attention/ it has been brought to public attention that.... 二、中间句型。 最简单的就是, Firstly , Secondly, ...... the last but not least. 其实这里有很多表达,但却最容易出错,就是混用,比如 说,有同学用, first of all, Secondly,这样就不行, first of all 对应的应该是 then,besides,furthermore. 所以这里要小心谨慎使 用,不行就用最简单的。 这里告诉你我的惯用, 自认为还比较新颖。 what comes first is后面一定要接名词或名词性从句, then comes,next comes, the last but not least.还有一点也最容易出错,就是 For one thing ,for another只能用于引出某种现象的理由,并不能表示任何的第一点第 二点等等,另外, on one hand, on the other hand只能用于引出相互矛盾相反的观点,并不能表示并列的一方面,另一方面。所以 一定要谨慎。 三、结尾句型。 From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...... For the reasons above,...... In conclusion, To sum up All available evidence goes to show that...... It is high time that we put an end to this phenomenon/ we should ...Only in this way can...... 下面是我给他批改的作文,你可以不看作文内容,领会一下里面的方法就好 。 题目的要求:一般的四级作文题应该有题目,这样自己就不用自拟了,如果没有,题目的拟定是有要求的,并不像汉语作文的题目那样 绘声绘色,它要求直观简洁。 第一句很好。 It attracts more people to visit and makes people Nowadays , more and more museums are open free. The first intention of free admission is to attract more visitors and to make people However,it also results in some problems. 承上启下,简洁明了。然而下面的内容应该是偷懒了吧,没有认真写哦,最主 要的一段怎么字数不够,没有层次呢?一般的四级作文你首先要根据它对每一段的要求明确出哪一段需要的篇幅最大,一般都是中间的 一段,但是这篇作文其实第一段和第二段地位应该是一样的,一个优点一个缺点,但是为了行文结构美观,我们一般不在首段上用太多 篇幅,所以我的选择是第一段也分出点来已示它同等重要,但又不过多阐述。这点考试时自己要视情况而定。 The museums will get crowded,people may damage t