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PAGE \* MERGEFORMAT PAGE \* MERGEFORMAT 6 八年级上册书面表达训练 作文指导加范例点评与练习( 上) Unit1 Where did you go on vacation ? 写作指南 本单元的写作任务是写关于假期活动的文章。写这样的文章时，要从以下几个方面入手： 1．你在哪儿度的假期？ 2．在假期期间你做什么了？ 3．那儿的天气怎么样？ 4．你认为那儿的人怎么样？ 5．你喜欢那儿的食物吗？为什么？ 由于写的活动已经过去，故时态用一般过去时。 常用句型： 1．I went to...on vacation. 2．The food there was... 3．The people there were... eq \o(\s\up12(),\s\do4(佳作欣赏)) 去年的暑假你是怎样度过的？去了什么地方？那里的食物怎么样？那里的人怎么样？有哪些有趣的或难忘的事情发生？和大家分享一下吧。请运用本单元所学知识，写一篇关于假期活动的短文。 I still remembered my last summer vacation. My family and I went to see my grandparents in the countryside. The weather there was nice. Sometimes I went to the mountains with my grandfather. Sometimes I went swimming by myself. My grandmother cooked delicious food for us every day. In the evening，we all sat together and watched TV. What a great time we had! 点评：作者用I still remembered my last summer vacation引入正题，介绍了在暑假期间和家人去乡下看望祖父母的经历。重点介绍了在乡下的活动，讲述得条理有序。其中sometimes的使用，使文中内容更为丰富。最后以What a great time we had！结尾，既写出了自己的感受，又对全文进行了总结。 写作练习 Unit1 假设你是张杰。你父母去过世界上许多地方旅游。然而，给你印象最深的是巴黎之旅。请根据下面表格提示，以The trip to Paris为题写一篇70字左右的文章。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考范文： Paris ，France Time Last summer vacation Hong you stay there For four days What you did visited the Eiffel Tower ,tasted delicious wine and bought something nice Feeling tired but excited The trip Paris My name is Zhang Jie. My parent and I visited many big city around the world.But the trip to Pais,France was the most exciting one.We went to Pais last summer vacation.We got there by plane and stayed there for five days.When we were in Paris,we visited the Eiffel Tower and many other places of interest there.All of us had a great time.Paris is famous for its delicious wine.So we tasted it.Later,we bought something nice and went to parties.Although the trip seemed to be short and we were tired,we felt excited. Unit 2　How often do you exercise? 写作指南 本单元是写关于介绍某人进行某活动的文章。通常以记叙文的形式体现。写此文章时，应注意： 一、可以开篇点题，在文章的开始交代人物，然后再进一步详细叙述情况。如做了什么事，多久做一次等，使文章内容具体、