English writing 英语书面表达训练(书信类)教学设计.docxVIP

English writing 英语书面表达训练(书信类)教学设计 Teaching aims Help the students to develop their writing ability Teaching difficult point How to develop their writing ability Teaching tools A projector, PowerPoint Teaching methods Discussion, group work and exercise practice Teaching steps Step I Introduction1 Show them what kinds of writings the teachers like and dislike to attract their attention 高考阅卷老师喜欢的作文： 1.语言简洁、层次清晰 2.选词准确、句式多变 3.内容连贯、表达地道 4.书写规范、卷面整洁 高考阅卷老师讨厌的作文： 1.语言繁琐、层次不清 2.词汇错误、句式单一 3.表达不清、汉式英语 4.书写潦草、无法辨认 Step 2 introduction2 Show them the techniques to write a good writing. 1、扬长避短 写句子时努力克服“缺胳膊 少腿”、“画蛇添足”、 “张冠李戴”、“乱点鸳鸯”、 “生搬硬套”和“瞻前不顾后” 等错误。 “缺胳膊少腿”类 However, other students against the idea of visiting Internet bars. (缺少谓语, 在against 前加are) I thought the lonely bird on my way to school. (缺少介词,在thought后加of) “画蛇添足”类 But there are 60% of the students are against the idea of playing too much computer games. (去掉there are, 或在第二个 are前加关系代词who。) “乱点鸳鸯”类 . Playing computer games for a long time makes a bad effect on our study and health. 动宾不当, 把makes改为has 2、显示文采 A. 有效使用复合句 B.多种句型交替使用 C. 准确使用句与句之间的连接成分 常用的连接词汇有： (1)表顺序：first, then, finally, the former, the latter 等 (2)表转折：but, however, on the contrary, instead, nevertheless, yet 等。 (3)表递进：what’s more, besides, even, moreover, furthermore 等。 (4)表因果：so, therefore, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, on account of 等。 (5)表总结：as you know, as far as I’m concerned, generally speaking, in a word, in all, in short等。 (6)表对比：on one hand, on the other, while等。 3、展示个性 所谓展示个性就是与众不同，特别表现在词汇的选取和运用上。新的评分标准要求我们尽量使用高级词汇。所谓高级词汇并不是越难越好，越长越好。主要是指那些大部分同学都想不到的表达方式，也就是与众不同啦。 例如： 1.She knows English well. She has a good knowledge of English. She feels at home in English. (at home:得心应手。) 2. English is becoming more and more important. English is becoming increasingly important. 4. 亮而出 A 书写规范 卷面整洁 B亮的开头，好的结尾。 不论采用什么形式开头，都不要在前几句就暴露出自己的弱点，如基础 性的单词拼写错误、语法错误，这样会 直接影响阅卷人的情绪。 结尾时要有总结性的句子，应简洁，不要拖泥带水。 Step 3 analyzing 假如你是李华，你的网友Alee和她的好友都去了舟曲县做志