雅思写作G类攻略2015.ppt

Compared with adults, teenagers are more likely to be led astray. [Reason] This is because teenagers are often mentally immature. they may find it hard to distinguish right from wrong and tend to be influenced by certain TV programs or movies (teenagers’ minds are immature) This means in many cases, [Development] containing excessive misleading contents. In addition, schools should take more responsibilities for the rising cases of juvenile delinquency as well. [Reason] leading to the result that many students are ignorant of what is right to do. To be more specific, it is often the case that many schools, which solely regard university enrolment rates as their priority, ignore the education of moral values to the students, [Development] Solution部分具体结构 【1】 Topic Sentence 【2】 Solution1 【3】 Development (Theoretical Evidence/Case Evidence) 【4】 Solution2 【5】 Development (Theoretical Evidence/Case Evidence) To tackle the problem, the government as well as schools should join hands. To begin with, the government should legislate strictly preventing teenagers from committing crimes. For example, people under a certain age should be strictly banned from entering pubs or purchasing alcohol, [Topic Sentence] [Solution] [Development] which could potentially reduce the possibility of the occurrence of teenagers’ misconduct. Moreover, efforts should be made to popularize moral education in schools. [Solution] To be more specific, courses introducing moral values should be made compulsory. When more teenagers have proper moral values, the rate of juvenile delinquency is expected to be greatly reduced accordingly. [Development] Conclusion To conclude, while the increasing cases of juvenile delinquency can be attributed to different reasons, I believe the problem can be solved as long as the government and schools make joint efforts. In some parts of the world, it is becoming popular to research the history of one’s own family. Why people might want to do this? Is it a