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高三英语二轮复习 专项突破阶段 书信体应用文 一篇高分作文有什么标准 ？ 全国高考英语书面表达的评分标准： 第五档（很好） 1.覆盖所有主要内容； 2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇； 3.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致； 4.应用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。 ⒈学会使用较高级的词汇 　 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。从评分标准可知，运用高级的词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。大家先来看下面这些句子： ⑴ Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. （升级改造）→ Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. ⒈学会使用较高级的词汇 ⑵ We all think he is a great man. （升级改造）→ We think highly of him. ⑶ Suddenly I thought out a good idea.　　 （升级改造）→ A good idea occurred to me. = A good idea suddenly struck me. 　⑷The students there needn’t pay for their books. 　Books are free for the students there. 　⑸As a result the plan was a failure. 　The plan turned out (to be) a failure. 　⑹When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. 　At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.　　 ⑺She went to Austria in order to study music. 　She went to Austria for/with the purpose of studying music. 　⑻When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. 　The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. 　⑼In our school, there are twenty–six classrooms. 　Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms. /Twenty–six classrooms make up our school. 　⑽You can find my house easily. 　You’ll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house. ⒉学会使用较丰富的句式 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型，要灵活运用各种语法结构，运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。例如： ⑴When he arrives, please give me an e-mail. （升级改造） → On his arriving / arrival , please give me an e-mail. 　⑵To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） →What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. → It surprises him that the littler girl knows so many things . 　　　　⑶Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句) 　　→Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. 　　⑷He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型 ? ①.It was…②.not until…) 　　→①It was not until he had