2016江苏高考英语读写类作文讲评-课件(讲稿).pptVIP

学生习作改错 To avoid such tragedy happening again, the authorities should have special emergency response plans and make sufficient analysis and assessment.(王丽娟) （1） Summarize incomplete idea （2） Misuse/misunderstand original passage （3）Too many mistakes made in sentence structures （4）Express opinions too early （5）Apply the suggestions from original passage （6）Too simple sentences 本次作文中存在的问题： 学生习作改错 In public, I follow the traffic lights. I don’t play on the street. (黄嘉楠) In my opinion, if we want to live in a safe environment, we will be careful. (徐菁玲) My friend likes shopping. When she g