写作技法点拨系列 1.3.ppt

三、学会简约简洁, 提升文章魅力 【技巧点拨】 　　在写作的时候, 应该适当使用复杂句式, 同时注意避免不必要的赘述, 让语句变得简约简洁。要想做到这一点, 牢记“123原则”——即一个介词短语、两个并列结构(包括名词性词组、或形容词性词组作状语和同位语等)、三个非谓语结构。 1. 使用介词短语替代从句, 让句子变得简洁 介词不能单独在句子中充当一个成分, 而必须和另外的词(如名词、代词、动名词等)构成介词短语, 在句子中担任一个成分。介词短语在句中主要充当状语和定语, 并且有时候可以被用来替代状语从句和定语从句, 使得句子更简洁。 (1)充当状语替代状语从句 介词短语作状语用得最多, 可以表示时间、地点、方式、条件、目的、原因等, 所以介词短语也就可以相应地替代时间状语从句、地点状语从句和条件状语从句等。 The game was put off because it rained. →The game was put off because of rain. 【考题再现】 (2016·天津高考)At last, ________________________ ____________, I wish you will have a safe and happy journey home. 最后, 我代表我们学校的全体同学祝你旅途愉快, 安全 到家。 on behalf of all the students in our school (2)充当定语替代定语从句 介词短语的另一个重要用法就是在句子中充当定语成分, 修饰其前面的名词或名词短语, 也可以被用来替代定语从句。 Look at the sentences which are on the blackboard. →Look at the sentences on the blackboard. 【考题再现】 (2016·全国卷Ⅰ)I’m Li Hua ________________ ___________________. 我是李华, 上个学期参加了你的英语写作课。 from your English writing class last term 2. 使用非谓语动词短语, 让句子变得简洁 (1)充当定语替代定语从句 He is always the first person who arrives at the office. →He is always the first(person) to arrive at the office. 【考题再现】 (2015·全国卷Ⅰ)The“Foreign Cultures”section carries articles ______________________ about the cultures of their home countries. “外国文化”栏目包含由外国朋友们写的关于他们国家 文化的文章。 written by foreign friends (2)充当状语替代状语从句 We are very excited because we heard the good news. →We are very excited to hear the good news. 【考题再现】 ①(2015·北京高考)I’m writing ___________________ ____ for the summer holiday. 我写信是为了把我激动人心的暑假计划告诉你。 to tell you my exciting plan ②(2015·浙江高考)________, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly. 通过这样做, 我不仅可以和其他人分享好主意, 还可以 学习清楚地表达自己的观点。世纪金榜导学 Doing so 3. 使用并列结构, 让句子变得简洁 并列结构能够有效地降低句子的繁琐程度, 避免不必要的重复, 使得句子更加简洁和紧凑。常见的并列结构有both. . . and. . . ; neither. . . nor. . . ; not only. . . but(also). . . 等。 I am a music lover. Jack is also a music lover. →Both Jack and I are music lovers. 我和杰克都是音乐爱好者。 I like watching the talk show. Tom likes watching the talk sho