初中英语书面表达写作指导课件.pptVIP

中考作文评分标准 第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表 达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。 作文练习 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 审 如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲 A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation. 加 加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well. 连 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 改 选好词句，修改文章。注意语言的正确性。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。 * 初中英语书面表达 写作技巧指导 健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。 travel stay at home visit friends or parents work travel Stay at home visit friends or parents work 写作第一步 审 健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。 travel stay at home visit friends or parents work Health is very important. (Cui Zixuan) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report (miss zhang) Last Sunday , I asked some students about what they did on vacation (Yan pengwei ) 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。 列 写作第二步 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点 stay at home work visit friends or parents travel 列 写作第三步： A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. How do people spend their vacation? W