英语人教版八年级上册《My Dream》教学设计（写作课）.pptVIP

教师：靳新华;; 学习目标 1.通过复习职业名词，在师生问答中，明确自己的梦想和实现梦想的计划。 2.通过阅读范文和评价标准，在对比范文中学习写作过程中如何把握要点，避免失分。 3.通过写作、自评、互评方式，提高自我写作水平。;computer programmer;;作文（15分）;Read the compositions 1---3, and give your points to each composition to see which one is the best. Composition 1 _______points Composition 2 _______points Composition 3 _______points;评分标准：;Composition 1;Composition 2;Composition 3 My dream I want to be a writer when I grow up. I like writing in my free time. Writing is an important part of my life. Through writing I am able to share my ideas and make friends with others. First, I am going to achieve my dream by reading widely and by working hard at school to learn as much as possible. Second, it’s also important to learn from successful people. Third, I will keep on writing diaries and stories after school. I will hold on to my dream until it comes true. ;1. Analyze the key points and make an outline.;2. Choose correct conjunctions. and, but, when, although, however… firstly, secondly, thirdly… first, then, next, finally…;3. Use a variety of good sentence patterns. eg. I am going to go to university.;4. Make a good and impressive conclusion. I hope / believe / am sure… I will try my best to… I will keep on… I will hold on …;;作文(15分) 请以“my dream” 为题，写一篇英语短文。 要点：1. 你的梦想是什么？ 2. 你为什么选择这个梦想？ 3. 你打算怎样实现你的梦想？ 要求：1. 短文应包括所有要点，可适当发挥。 2. 结构严谨、表达清晰、语意连贯。 3. 80词左右。;Share your compositions;My Dream;;