英语人教版八年级上册My dream job.pptVIP

;;scientist;Do you think these jobs are interesting?;helpful / busy/ great / interesting / fun/ dangerous/ exciting / boring/ relaxing;; ;;思路导引;; 假设你是Jacky。你看了一则应聘导游(tour guide)的工作，你想应聘这份工作, 根据所给的要点用4-5句话口述你的求职报告。; 每个人都有自己的理想。你的理想是什么？你想拥有什么样的工作？为什么喜欢这类工作?你有什么兴趣、爱好？如果你有了理想工作你会怎样？ 现在你怎样做？用你所学的英语知识，以“ My Dream Job ”为题写一篇不少于50词的小短文。;评批作文要点： 1、文章是否切题，时态是否正确， 是否完全包含提纲所列要点 2、词数是否达到要求 3、有无拼写、标点符号错误 4、句式运用是否正确;My Dream Job;（一）不一致：主谓不一致，数的不一致，时态不一致，代词不一致等. 例：Once one have money ,he can do what he wants(to do). 改为??Once one has money ,he can do what he wants(to do). （二）修饰语错位：同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义能引起变化. 例：He very likes the action films. 改为：He likes the action films very much. （三）句子不完整：句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清. 例：We busy with our study. 改为：We are busy with our study. （四） 词性误用：介词当动词用，形容词当副词用，名词当动词用等. 例：We by a boat to DaLian. 改为：We go to DaLian by boat . ;（五）不间断句子： 例：There are many trees beside the road and have many flowers there . 改为：There are many trees beside the road and (there are) many flowers there . （六）措词毛病：在指定的句子中，如何适当选用词语。 例：Lu Xun is a famous people . 改为:Lu Xun is a famous person . （七）累赘：言以简洁为贵。 例;We stay in a hotel in the nearby suburb of Guilin . 改为：we stay in a hotel near Guilin. （八）不连贯：指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。 例：I think going to school by bus is the best way to go to school. 改为：I think it is the best way to go to school by bus . （九）综合性语言错误： 例：They dont know how to do 改为：They dont know what to do 或：They dont know how to do it 除了上述九种错误外，还有诸如时态、标点符号、大小写等错误。 ;盘 点 收 获;;