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A: What do you want to be when you grow up? B: I want to be a/an …when I grow up. A: Where will you live? B: I will live… A: How will you go to work? B: I will go to work… A: What …? B: ... A: Where …? B: … A: How…? B: … My Life in Twenty Years I want to be an actress in twenty years. I will live in Beijing. I will go to work by car. I’m going to take acting lessons , make friends and keep a dog in the future. I want to be an actress. Why do you want to be an actress? I am going to live in Beijing. Why are you going to live in Beijing? I will go to work by subway? Why will you go to work by subway? Ending(结尾): I will try my best to make my dream come true. 注意： 锦上添花，量力而行，没有把握，宁可不动。 以My Life in Twenty Years为题目写一篇作文。请你从职业，居住地，出行以及业余活动描述你二十年后的生活状况要求：1.句子结构完整，条理清晰，文体规范。2.80词左右。 习作练习 1.判断文体： 记叙文 3.思考方向： 2.判断时态： 一般将来时 按照合理的逻辑顺序描述 围绕主题，迸发思想的火花 梳理与归纳，完整阐述题目要求，词-句-篇 开头 主体：主题句 +支撑句 结尾 连词、过渡句 完成淡妆 合理修饰，华丽转身 ---步骤与技巧 ------把好检查关 四个“是否”要牢记 ·是否切题 ·是否连贯 ·是否有语法错误 ·是否书写工整（大小写、拼写、标点、字字落线） 8 HOMEWORK 把修改好的作文工整的誊抄在作业本上。 0 9 0 0 0 1 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 5 0 0 0 4 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 3 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 2 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 0 Hours Minutes Seconds Stop! * * * * 第七单元 以My Life in Twenty Years为题目写一篇作文。请你从职业，居住地，出行以及业余活动描述你二十年后的生活状况。要求：1.句子结构完整，条理清晰，文体规范。2.80词左右。 习作练习 1.判断文体： 记叙文 3.思考方向： 2.判断时态： 一般将来时 按照合理的逻辑顺序描述 in 20 years actress Beijing By subway Take acting lessons Make friends , keep a dog 引题： 探讨一： 思想的小火花1： 思想的小火花2： What do you think your life will be like in twenty years? I will be an actress. 词 句 点题句 topic sentence Reasons( Why…) 2 Small T.S. 归纳： 探讨一： 思想的小火花1： 思想的小火花2： What do you think your life will be like in twenty years? I will be an actress. I like watching movies. The job is interesting . 词 句 点题句 topic sentence Reasons( Why…) 2 Small T.S. 探讨二： 思想的小火花1： 思想的小火花2： I will live in Beijing. Beijing is the most popular city. There will be more jobs in that city. 词 句 Small T.S. 词 句 探讨三： 思想的小火花1： 思想的小火花2： I