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Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like women. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Today，in any truly enlightened countries, women play essential roles in the political, economic and cultural arenas. Yet whether ladies should be entitled to serve in the military has sparked spirited debate. Some assert that the status quo should be changed and ladies should be allowed to join the armed forces. Speaking for myself, I fundamentally agree with their assertion-for three reasons. On the one hand, it is obvious that ladies joining the military may bring numerous benefits.正方中心论点 In the first place, history has shown that women were fully capable of performing well in military.分论点1 For instance, two world-renowned military figures-----Joan of Arc and Mulan really put their male counterparts to shame with their outstanding performance in the army. In the second place, from an enlightened standpoint, female patriots should be granted the right to go to the front line when their motherland is involved in a war. 分论点2Considering the sweeping progress in gender equality, there is really no sense in denying them the right to stand up for their home country when war breaks out. Lastly, in the information era, computerization and digitalization in the military have made it much easier for women soldiers to operate modern weapons.分论点3 正方中心论点 分论点1 分论点2 分论点3 On the other hand, allowing ladies to join the army may carry certain risks让步观点. The most serious one is that this may further drive up the already high crime rate in some armies.让步观点1 The recent series of sex scandals in the US navy serve as convincing proof if this risk. For another, the health hazards that serving in the military may pose to women are very real.让步观点2 For example, research has revealed that on average American women soldiers in Iraq are suffering from more serious and complicated physical and mental illness than the American servicemen in the same regi