人教版高中英语必修1Unit 5 Nelson Mandela—a modern hero Part课件 (3).pptVIP

Part 4　Writing 写作技巧 点拨 书面表达 训练 人物简介 写作技巧·点拨 ◆ 作文实例 根据下列内容,用英语写一篇介绍世界著名童话作家安徒生(Hans Christian Andersen)的短文。词数100左右。 他生于1805年。十一岁丧父。由于家庭贫穷,童年时期他没能上学,学习缝纫技术以谋生。十四岁时到一剧院工作。后来在一些好心人的帮助下上了学。1828年接受高等教育(higher education)。毕业后从事文学(literature)创作。他坚持写小说和诗歌。他努力创作,获得很大成功。他一生共创作一百六十多个故事。1875年去世。 ◆ 题目研读 这是一篇人物简介,可以按照安徒生的成长及经历的顺序来描写,时态应该用一般过去时,人称用第三人称。 ◆ 要点信息 1.出生于……be born in... 2.接受高等教育 receive higher education 3.从事文学创作work on literature 4.去世于……die in... ◆ 连词成句 1.他于1875年去世,给世界留下了160多个故事。(现在分词作状语) He died in 1875, . leaving the world more than 160 stories 2.后来,在一些好心人的帮助下,安徒生得到了上学机会。(have the chance to...) Later,with the help of some kind people,Andersen . go to school. had the chance to ◆ 一句多译 因为家里穷,所以他没能上学。 ①Because his family was poor,he couldn’t go to school. ②He couldn’t go to school,for his family was poor. ③His family was poor.He couldn’t go to school. ④Being poor,his family couldn’t send him to school. 思考:你认为哪种表达方式最好?你的表达方式? ◆ 连句成篇 Andersen was born in 1805.His father died ①when he was only eleven.②Being poor,his family couldn’t send him to school.③He had to go and learn sewing to make a living.At the age of fourteen,he went to work at a theatre.Later,with the help of some kind people,Andersen ③had the chance to go to school.In 1828,he received higher education.③After graduation he began to work on literature.He kept on writing stories and poems.His hard work ③brought him great success.He died in 1875,②leaving the world more than 160 stories. ◆ 范文点评 本文结构严谨,层次分明。词汇和语法选用恰当,而且有效地使用了连接成分,使文章浑然一体。是一篇不错的人物简介习作。 ①状语从句的使用丰富了写作语言。 ②非谓语动词的使用提升了文章档次。 ③高级表达的运用体现了作者较高的写作功底。 假如你叫李林,从报纸上得知某少儿英语机构暑假期间需要一位兼职英文翻译,请你给该机构写一封英文求职信,内容要点如下: 1.个人信息:李林17岁,健康,在某高中就读; 2.业余爱好:游泳,唱歌,跳舞; 3.外语程度:英语成绩优秀,口语流利,能与外国人顺畅交流。 书面表达·训练 One possible version: Dear Madam, Your advertisement for an English translator in a newspaper interested me because the position that you described sou