高考阅卷书面表达常见问题评析.ppt

* 上虞城南中学 甘建国 07浙江省高考阅卷中书面表达常见问题评析 上虞市城南中学 陈萍 一、试题特点 试题要求 在英语课堂上，你喜欢你老师授课时只用英语还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你围绕 “How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?” 这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。 授课形式一：只用英语 优点：有助于提高听说能力等…… 缺憾：不易听懂等…… 结论：…… 授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用 优点：易于理解等…… 缺憾：英语氛围不浓等…… 结论：…… 注意：1.词数100---120, 短文开头已给出(不计 词数). 2.参考词汇:atmosphere 氛围 I prefer my English classes to be taught in …… 命题特点 “半开放”式命题形式，采用“二选一”的形式，要求明确，话题贴近学生生活，使学生有话可说，表达难度不大。 二、篇章结构基本模式 第一段，该授课形式的优点，篇幅的 比重相对较大； 第二段，该授课形式的不足，篇幅可 稍小些； 第三段，结论部分，简明扼要为好。 三、评分依据和原则 首先根据 文章内容、语言、逻辑、字数等确定所属档次 ； 然后根据该档次的要求进行衡量和比较； 最后在该档次的5分内给出相对准确的分数。 四、存在问题 1. (审题不当套路式) I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese. Now in our English classes, with how to be taught we have two choices: In English only, or in both English and Chinese, and it’s all has it’s advantages and disadvantages. If in English only, can make our listening and speaking more good, and what worse, we will hard to understand our class. But if in both English and Chinese, also understand will be more easily, the English atmosphere is less than in English only. In my opinion, we study English to understand it is the most important. After we study and understand it good, listening or speaking will be easy. So I think my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese will be more better. 2. 语言上 1)单词拼写错误 Eg: enviroment(environment) teached (taught) creat ( create) oppounities ( opportunities) lessen (lesson) atmsphere (atmosphere) adventage(advantage) image(imagine) batter (better) 2)表达不够地道，中式英文层出不穷 ◆We can ask the teacher where we don’t very understand easy. ◆ We could feel the English atmosphere very much. ◆We will hard to understand our class. Eg: ◆ My Engl