地点描述类-英语写作公开课.ppt

旅游景点 a place of interest ?名胜 a famous tourist resort a tourist attraction a tourist destination 旅游景点，旅游目的地 a scenic spot ?风景区 Practice: 1.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。 China, one of the largest countries in the world, is located in the east of Asia. 2.多伦多是加拿大东部的一个繁华的港口城市，总面积1, 850平方千米，总人口261万人。(cover a total area of) Toronto, a busy port city on the east coast of Canada, covers a total area of 1,850 square kilometers with a population of 2.61million. Practice: 3. 中国是一个古老的(ancient) 国度，有将近五千年的历史。(with a history of ) China is an ancient country with a long history of almost 5000 years. 4. 西藏有其独特(unique)的文化，和众多的名胜如布达拉宫(Potala Palace)，深深地吸引各地游。(be well-known for) Tibet is well-known for its unique culture and a number of places of interest such as Potala Palace, attracting tourists from all over the world. Let’s have a try. 根据以下内容, 用5句话写一篇短文： 北京是中国首都，位于中国北部，人口达2114万，面积是16410平方千米。拥有3000多年悠久历史，在不同的朝代有不同的称谓。作为文化名城，它拥有众多名胜，如长城，故宫等，吸引八方来客。2008年成功举办了奥运会，给世界人民很好的机会了解北京。 参考词汇：朝代 dynasty 故宫 the Forbidden City 写作思路： 1、审题----- 文体：地点介绍 人称： 第三人称 时态： 一般现在时、过去式 2、谋篇：要点重组位置、面积、人口、风景特色 3、行文：运用不同的句型进行翻译 4 润色：(1) 在文章中使用一些非谓语动词。 （2）巧用同位语（3）活用从句（4）巧用连接词 Beijing, the capital city of China, is located in the north of China. //It covers an area of 16,410 square kilometers with a population of 21.14 million.// It was an ancient city with a long history of more than 3000 years and has different names in different dynasties.// As a famous cultural city, Beijing is famous for many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and so on, attracting tourists from home and abroad every year. It is in 2008 that Beijing succeeded in holding the Olympic Games, which offers a very good chance for people around the world to know more about it. Homework： (根据以下内容,用5句话写一篇短文) 澳大利亚位于太平洋的南面,是大洋洲最大的国家，面积达760万平方公里。但它的人口稀少，只有1000多万人。它是一个以干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量。它由六个洲组成，其中墨尔本（Melbourne)和悉尼是最大的两个城市.首都堪培拉(Canberra)风景秀丽。澳大利亚以明媚的阳光、数不清的牛羊和独特的野生动植物而闻名于世。世