原因分析类作文.ppt

14分作文 切题 表达思想清楚 文字通顺、连贯 基本上无语言错误。 To the point Details and examples Facility in the use of language and appropriate word choice 写作基本步骤 第一步：确定各段主题（一般三段式）。 Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags 1.一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 2.由此带来的问题 3.限制一次性塑料袋的意义 第一段主题：描述一次性塑料袋在人们生活中广泛应用的情况。 第二段主题：指出一次性塑料袋带来的问题和危害。 第三段主题：阐述限制使用一次性塑料袋的作用和意义。 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 第二步：列出各段提纲 What Electives to Choose 1.各大学开设了各种各样的选修课 2.学生因为各种原因选择了不同选修课 3.以你自己为例 第一段提纲：开设选修课的作用— 有效利用课余时间；是必修课的有益补充。 第二段提纲：兴趣；学习技能；任课教师水平。 第三段提纲：开阔视野 第三步：逐一展开段落 What Electives to Choose 1.各大学开设了各种各样的选修课 2.学生因为各种原因选择了不同选修课 3.以你自己为例 Body： Topic sentence主题句 Developer( supporting details 1.2.3)拓展句 Terminator 结尾句（也可没有） When choosing an elective, different students will consider different factors. Firstly, the interests of the students plays a very important role. Secondly, many students will consider whether they could learn some practical skills by the elective, because nowadays companies are placing emphasis on a candidate’s practical skills. Finally, the ability and the prestige of the teacher who teaches the elective will also influence one student’s choice. 第四步：通读全文检查 拼写、语法、句子结构方面的错误 Assignment Credit Cards on Campus 1.近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用引用卡。 2.分析产生该现象的原因。 3.针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议。 说明原因 引出原因 1.There are many factors explaining/ accounting for/ contributing to … 2.There are a large number of reasons for this…, but in general, they come down to three major ones. 3.There are mainly three reasons for/ behind… 4.The reasons for…mainly lie in the following two aspects. 5.The reasons for…are obvious. 6.The following reasons/ factors can account for/ are responsible for/ contribute to 7.Why does/is…? 8….is mainly caused b