2014中考英语作文突破指导.ppt

三段式： 首段： 正文： 结尾： 谭老师的个人简介 谭老师的英雄事迹 作者的感受和愿望 列出7个内容要点： 1）外表严肃； 2）对学生要求严格； 3） 深爱学生； 4）地震时在上课； 5）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身； 6）感受； 7）愿望。 He looks serious. He’s strict with his students. He loves his students deeply. He was giving lessons at that moment. When the teaching building callapsed, he protected four students with his body. I feel deeply moved. I’ll learn from him. 连句成文： Tan Qianqiu was born in 1957 in Hunan province. He graduated from Hunan University. He taught politics in a middle school in Deyang city, Sichuan province. He had taught there for 27 years. He looked serious. He was very strict with his students. He loved them deeply. When the Wenchuan earthquake happened, he was giving a lesson. The school building collapsed. he protected his four students with his body. The students were saved. Mr Tan lost his life. I am deeply moved by his deeds. Mr Tan is an ordinary teacher and a great hero. I will learn from him. Homework Finish rewriting the composition after class，using the techniques learned in this lesson. Tan Qianqiu was born in 1957 in Hunan province. After graduating from Hunan University, he taught politics in a middle school in Deyang city, Sichuan province. He had taught there for 27 years. Though he looked serious and was very strict with his students,he loved them deeply. When the Wenchuan earthquake happened, he was giving a lesson. At the moment the school building collapsed, he protected his four students with his body. The students were saved, but Mr Tan lost his life. I am deeply moved by his deeds. Mr Tan is not only an ordinary teacher, but also a great hero. I will learn from him. I will study harder and be a person like him when I grow up. 温馨提示: 后期复习应以阅读为中心，坚持 “全面、系统、扎实、灵活”的基本指导思想，立足语言基础知识，进行系统地梳理、归纳、总结和拓展，突出语言应用，注重能力培养。 Thank you! Goodbye! A good passage= A right title +  A healthy body + A nice conclusion/ end 谢 谢！