话题写作02 物品介绍篇.pptxVIP

书面表达;【话题点睛】 (1)涉及的话题主要有:物品介绍、失物招领等。 (2)涉及的要点:学习用品、生活用品、发明物等在外形、颜色、功能、用途、操作步骤以及特点等方面的介绍。;(3)词数:不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。;【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:主题是对书包进行描述,文章主要有4个要点: (1)书包的外形特征;(2)书包的用途;(3)书包背后的课业问题;(4)课余期望做的事情。 2.确定时态:一般现在时 3.确定人称:第三人称;【基础写作】 Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。) 1.书包总是陪伴在我们的身边。(always) The schoolbag is 　　　　by our side.? 2.然而,它也给我们带来许多麻烦。(however) 　　　 　, it also 　　　　　　us many problems.? 3.不是享受精彩的周末,我们被迫用它上额外的课。(instead of) 　　　　　　　　enjoying the wonderful 　　 　　, we are forced to have extra classes with it.? 4.如果我们有更多的空余时间,我们能参加活动、做运动。(if) 　　　　we have more spare time, we can 　　　　　　　　activities and play sports.?;5.此外,我们也能够培养爱好和兴趣。(as well) 　　 　　, we can develop hobbies and interest 　　　　　　.? 6.作为一名中学生,我希望我的书包能分享我的乐趣和快乐而不是变成一种负担。(rather than) 　　　　 a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can 　　　　my joy and happiness 　　　　　　　　become a burden.?;Ⅱ.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。) 1.I use it to carry the school things, such as books, pens and so on. (改为被动语态) 2.It looks like a luggage. The luggage always accompanies me in the world of knowledge. (合并为含有定语从句的复合句) 3.We have to do much homework. We cannot get enough sleep. (用so…that…将两句合并为一个复合句);【连句成文】 My Schoolbag I have a schoolbag. It is used to carry the school things, such as books, pens and so on. It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge. The schoolbag is always by our side. However, it also brings us many problems. We have to do so much homework that we cannot get enough sleep. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekend we are forced to have extra classes with it. If we have more spare time, we can take part in activities and play sports. Besides, we can develop hobbies and interest as well. As a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.;拓展积累;【物品来源表达】 1.There is a washing machine in my home. 2.It was invented by an American tanner named John Loud in 1888. 3.My mother bought the scarf for me as a gift. 【物品用途表达】 1.It